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March 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awwww, that was so romantic. I loved it.
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July 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YAY! SEXY SEXY ANDERSON! YAY!
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June 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hm, Anderson and Integra is a pairing you don\'t see often.
Maxwell and Integra. sometimes.
ALucard and Integtra. all the time.
Integra and Seras. rare, but interesting.
Anderson and Integra is a nice twist in paring.
I liked the reasons behind the story. Soft, quick, simple. Good.
(though for something that seems to last only five minutes, more touching, groping, more kissing. just more.)
good job, though. keep writing.
Maxwell and Integra. sometimes.
ALucard and Integtra. all the time.
Integra and Seras. rare, but interesting.
Anderson and Integra is a nice twist in paring.
I liked the reasons behind the story. Soft, quick, simple. Good.
(though for something that seems to last only five minutes, more touching, groping, more kissing. just more.)
good job, though. keep writing.
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June 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay for PWP-ness! I love the beginning of the story and Integral\'s reasoning to feel alive. I suggest to expand a bit the... action/penetration (if you want to keep it NC-17, otherwise looks very hard R to me), but otherwise I enjoyed it a lot. (Alex should search her a lighter for smoke a cigar *nods*).