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I really like the story were temptation lies. will you be updating it soon?

Thanks,
Katie ;)

please write more. i would love to see where this leads.

You have to finish. U can't leave us like that.
What will happen when Diamond and Serena meet again?
I need more

well well well! This is an interesting story. Gram and spelling are great, so that makes you a great writer in my book. Hmm...lets see, Serena is screwing around behind Darien\'s back with Diamond? That right there is something new. Usually people have Darien as the cheater, not poor innocent Serena. I hope you include a section where Darien finds out of her affair and confronts her. As for Rini and Hotaru? God\'s speed on that one. They are diffucult characters to work into adult stories.
Take this review for what its worth.

Oh, my, oh, my. And here I was all revved up to see the shock on Diamond\'s face when he found out he\'d been picked up by Serena\'s daughter. Oh, well, maybe later. And what\'s this about Zoicite marrying Haruka? Haruka is a solid couple with Michiru, she\'d never betray her Neptune! Ah, whatever. By the way, are you aware you\'ve been mispelling Hotaru? Just thought I\'d let you know.

You always write the most interesting stories and pairings ^^ Can\'t wait for more :)

interesting.... Will you update soon?

Interesting. And when Serena and Darien actually *get* there...hooo booooy.... Hope to see more soon. Laters!