rate_review Reviews

Devils-Advocate3: OMG.I LOVE YOUR STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! It was one of the best, no strike that, The best story I’ve ever read on Gravitation. O hell, it was the best story I’ve ever read! T_T Also, in my own opinion, your story is basted more on reality then others. I mean most writers write Eiri\'s character as a verbally abusive jerk. And astonish shuichi some how gets over that and stays with Eiri, and lives happily ever after! Bullshit! Hardly anyone in this world can live with an abusive person, and still have a happily ever after. But you instead changed Eiris character and made him kinder, gentler. Which Shichi really deserves!! No One and I mean NO ONE should get away with hurting Suichi. ^_^ . And on a personal note, I happen to love Eiris new found personality. (Giggle) Now he\'s an even better match for Shuichi. LOL. And as for the spelling ha ha ha, well will gust let that slid.

Yuki: Only because you can\'t spell for shit to save your own life!!

Devils-Advocate3: HAY!!! What did u just say?

Yuki: Da isn’t it obvious. God are you death and stupid too.

Devils-Advocate3: why I auda........Your just mad because I prefer your character to be a nice guy. Mmmmmmmmmmmmmmm (tong)

Yuki: whatever!

Devils-Advocate3: God your mean. Anyway, what I was trying too say before I was so rudely interrupted,

Yuki: Slut!!!!!

Devils-Advocate3: Asshole!!!

Devils-Advocate3: Anyway, Loved your story. Can\'t wait to read another. Doesn’t have to be necessarily be The Angel and the Demon just another like it. O and if you can I love stories that take place in high school! Don\'t know why just do. Ha-ha so if you can please write one in high school. Love ya Buy-buy ^ ^

the best way to described would be short and sweet i liked it

That was the best Yukixshu fic i\'ve ever read.*chapter 4:Pain was the best chapter* in the first 2 chapters you have alot of mistakes.

wow that was great
two chpters for the price of one.
i loved it.
oh and that lemon was really good.
too bad its over.
i loved it!

OMG
that was great
i love this story so much
i can\'t wait to see what happens.

wow loveing you\'r fic
im Looking foreward to your up date!!!!!!
hope to see you soon

WWOOO! I loved it! Is there going to be a lemon in the next chapter!?! OH PLEASE OH PLEASE LET THERE BE A LEMON!! Or at least some lime... Any ways you really need to have Yuki kick Ma-Kun and Taki\'s ASSES BIG TIME!! No one beats up Shuichi and gets away with it!! Looking foreward to your up date!! \\^o^/

~Kaime

Not a bad start at all. From what I can see there are not that many grammar mistakesbut then again im not too good at grammar myself. I like what you did with the characters. Its neat how you made Taii and Ma-kun related to Shuichi. Although it gets confusing when you skip from scene to scene with out any warning. I personally caught on after a while but Im not shure wether other people will get confused or not. Any ways you have a good start and Im eager for you to continue the story ^_^

i just want to say that it\'s so cool i love it keep going keep going okay
and i hope you up-dated .

WOAH!! this rocks!! hurrry!!!! write more!! i think the only problems are that u write too little and eiri\'s a bit OOC...its also kinda far-fetched, but any-hoo, i love it, and im sure others do aswell^_^
byebye^_^
~~goldenkinkogirl