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July 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I cannot believe you are going to leave us like this! This is a great story, but I am very impatiently waiting for the rest! Thanks for posting it though! (just PLEASE give us more real soon!)
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June 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Not bad at all, I gotta say. In fact that was pretty damn cool! Cannot wait until the next chapter!
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June 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, this was very well done. I can\'t wait for more, and I was happy to see you plan on doing more! Please, keep up the wonderful work you\'ve started.
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June 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
is the reason Eiri is OCC because it\'s after then anime. which would mean after the manga, which is after his breakthough in vol 11? because he really doesn love shu.. and he can be sensitive if he wants...
i didnt finish the story. i will sometime but good job!
i didnt finish the story. i will sometime but good job!
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June 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
‘He looks like a beautiful angelic angel.’
lol, anyway. I like your intro scene, sort of looking ahead to what\'s probably going to happen. Nice. Aside from that it got a little boring for me, maybe because Eiri seems strangely (and somehow sort of..creepy) out of character, which is too bad. So yeah, nice intro..and what /could/ build up to be a pretty neat story. Just...try to tone it down a bit on the overly-affectionate-SO VERY OOC-Yuki.. Just..please?
lol, anyway. I like your intro scene, sort of looking ahead to what\'s probably going to happen. Nice. Aside from that it got a little boring for me, maybe because Eiri seems strangely (and somehow sort of..creepy) out of character, which is too bad. So yeah, nice intro..and what /could/ build up to be a pretty neat story. Just...try to tone it down a bit on the overly-affectionate-SO VERY OOC-Yuki.. Just..please?