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No! How are they going to get out of this one? XDD Loved it and can't wait for the next one!

That's suspicious, I can't wait for your next update. *Yawn* I'm sorry I can't write more but I just started a new job and already it's getting to me. Taking the bus truly royally suck ass.

You Are Evil. But very nice and do try... I understand that you are busy but I'm really into this story! Can't wait fr the next one!

I hate your guts. Too damn short. MORE!!!!!

plz dont say thats all. put more plz its realy realy good so far.

OMG!!!!YAY!!!Go Shu-chan...please update soon this is really good

very kul indeed. cant wait for the next ch. i like how things r progressing. c-ya next time.

it's about damn time. Nice chapter, though. Things seem to be moving ahead finally. Can't wait for the next chapter. Ja!

I just love it when people make condescending statements like they know so much more than you, when they're showing that they obviously know nothing. Just ignore Aelan. He/she obviously didn't pay attention at all. First of all, about Eiri being OOC. This is a pretty dramatic situation, how many people do you know would hold on to a stiff, cold facade in a life or death situation? It's absurd her trying to say anything about that. Second, Eiri has been called both Yuki and Eiri. At times Uesugi was used too, so that's just dumb. Three, Yuki has be distant and cold at times, but he's also been sweet and caring. Like you said, some people really need to go back and as is said in Naruto, look "underneath the underneath." There are some people who just don't understand the concept of mental trauma and people acting a certain way to protect themselves from getting hurt, but that way that they act not being the way they truly are. Yuki is NOT as cold and unfeeling as he acts and he DOES love Shuichi, it's clear to see if you pay attention. Whatever, some people are just think they're smarter than they are and that they know more than everybody else. They just need to be ignored and completely disregarded. Your doing fine with your characterizations within the story so don't question yourself (in case you were) over some fool.

And now on to your the story, this chapter is making me think of what happened on Prison Break this week, where the woman called what she thought was the police and the call got routed to the bad guys and she ended up being killed. Interesting. Anyways I liked this new chapter, though it makes me worried for the next with that cliffie. Hopefully nothing bad, or at least permanent, will be happening to either Shuichi or Eiri (you know I just noticed that I'm bouncing between calling him Eiri and Yuki). But maybe that stupid bitch of a doctor could have a little accident and fall out of the helicopter, that would be nice.

You always, always leave a cliffhanger!!! But I loved it as usual... can't wait for the next one!