rate_review Reviews

Loved it, of course. Cannot wait until the next chapter is out. You gotta tell us what happened to Eiri. Is he alright? Is he dead? TELL US!!!! Or else. Just remember this, I know where you live!!

OHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!! MYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY GOSHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!! Eiri....please don't die....great job on this chapter

Got to say thank-you thank-you for posting a new chapter it is really good, I like the way the one train runs into the back of the other, bringing all of them together...Hope Shuichi finds Yuki...

hey!!!!! finish the story!!!!! i HATE cliffhangers like this!!!!!!!!!!!! geese woman, you really liike to make the hot bioys feel paiin don'y u? i like the part were the guy A... something or other trys 2 make conversation w/ Yuki. he never gave up. oh! i didn't really get how the girl was part of the plot though. maybe u could have made that clearer or something. please don't let Shuguru kill Hiroshi, but that whole seen w/ them is hilarious. alll in all i really like your writing still. u r defen. the suspenseful one arnt' u? well gatta go. mayb i'll review again. FINISH THE DAMN STORY WOMAN!! *eye twiches visibally* (don't take it the wrong way) ><

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!! Not Eiri -cries- please update soon I have to know if he lives or not

Kohaku, you are truly a meanie.
MEANIE!!
How very rude of you to just end it like that until after New Years!
AHHHHH!!!!
But very nicely done (mostly b/c I helped you on this chapter)
Hehe!
Can't wait for the next one!

booya

Great chapter, love the way write please keep going....

OMG NOT EIRI~!!!! He better be alive~!!! Or I'll cry~!!!!

I want more so bad can't wait for the next chapters but when is the lemon coming in =D -_~ Really awesome story so far keep up the good work booya ^-^