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December 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I undaerstand that Haruna had planned to have Eiri murdered so that she could hold Shuichi hostage for ransom. What I don't understand is how she knew Shuichi would be on the train when it was a last minute decision on his behalf. Or was she going to have him kidnapped from wherever after eiri has been murdered?
A nice reunion for the lovers but I feel it's going to be short lived because the hitman is still there somewhere isn't he?
A nice reunion for the lovers but I feel it's going to be short lived because the hitman is still there somewhere isn't he?
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December 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very nice. Very nice. But what happened to the bad guy? How did Shuichi get out of there after he killed Haruna and end up sound asleep hiding behind a bunch of stuff? Ahhhh!!!! TELL ME TELL ME TELL ME!!
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December 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter please keep going
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November 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I hope you get the next part out soon!! your story is really good!! (poor shuichi) keeep writing!! ^_^
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November 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is a really great story, I love it. I can\'t wait for a new chapter. I loved the way you had Eiri be so aggressive, it lets the darker side of him be shown. Great work! Keep it up.
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November 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It was great writing but not what I expected at all. But thats what good writting is about, I guess. But you have to not harm Shuichi or Erie please!!! ... update soon:)
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November 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow! what a cliffhanger!
Will Eiri get too Shuichi before it is too late!!
Will Shuchi get rape infront of him? Or Will the guy breack Shuichi legs when he try\'s to get away?
It would make it even better to see Eiri loose it and kill someone.
Go Eiri!!
Please update soon! Please?
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November 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Love this story please keep going..Hoping Shuichi makes it through...
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November 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god, this story\'s awesome! PLEASE PLEASE PLEEEAAASSSEEE update soon!!! T_T *wants the next chapter really bad*
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November 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Another nice chapter and thank you for finally getting to the point, though I have to admit, I never saw this coming. Can\'t wait for the next chapter. Ja ne!