rate_review Reviews

This is the first TRigun fic I\'ve read, and I\'m not dissapointed.
I love the imagery in this fic, It was almost as if I was there.
Great fic!

I think this is very good. I love the premise of Legato making Wolfwood rape somebody--it\'s a great idea to get him a bit occ and I myself have thought about how
to get that rapist mentality into a Trigun Wolfwood fan fic. You\'ve solved that problem. Only suggestions I can make is there is quite a bit of repetition in your
descriptions so maybe you could find different words instead of saying \"hissed\" and \"Fisted in his hair\" etc. so frequently. Overall, great job. :)

A very good story, and it was great how you let Vash get rid of Legato. The ending was a nice twist. You seem to have great feel for the relationship between Nicholas and Vash.

Excellent job. This is one of the first good lemons I\'ve seen since... even I can\'t remember. Although, you may want to be a little more careful when punctuating thoughts... I see a few that look rather lonely sans period.

But hey. You know what? I\'ve seen MUCH worse. Things that I have had to whack with a large sign that says \'Grammar.\' But hey--this is a good fic. Keep writing!

~A.H.

+Blinks.+...+Blinks again.+ You\'ve only been watching anime a YEAR? I feel that the community as a whole has been denied a wonderfully blossoming talent for a very long time. In other words, I really like your story. Characterization is great, and I love the fact that there actually WAS a plot with this. +Nods emphatically+ Very well done. I\'m looking forward to more stories from you in the future.

Pretty good story! The way you described Vash\'s feelings for Wolfwood were good. The horror and great sense of shame, turning into lust and love by Wolfwood was very well handled. 8-)