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Oh, this is so wonderful, I\'m freaking green with envy. I\'m so damn jealous of your writing! So anyway, the story/plot/characterization is amazing. You have them acting just like they should act in their situations and I\'m literally breathless with anticipation for more. Sigh, Mugen and Fuu...love it. Update!!!

*cries* Are you EVER going to update this wonderful fanfic?! *sobs horribly*

Wow! All I can say about this fic is Wow! This is so wonderfully written, and I can\'t wait to read more. Why no update yet? Please don\'t leave this out there like all of those amazing fics that just never get finished. Even if it takes a while, please finish!

PLEASEEEEEEEEE PLEASE UPDATE!!!!! IM DYING HERE!!!!!!!!!!!! ILL DO ANYTHING!!!!... SEE HOW DESPERATE IVE BECOME!!!??? PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE!!!!????? UPDATE NOW!!!!!! ILL BE WAITING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!...

I can\'t even begin to tell you how much I love your fic. Your characterization, to my standards, are near perfect. Having Mugen fall in love with Fuu isn\'t hard to believe at all, but there aren\'t many fics to help convince people of that notion. A fic like this doesn\'t come very often here on AFF.net. Anyways, I thoroughly enjoyed reading this story. If it wouldn\'t be too much in your way, could you email me or im me [aim screenname:bi0nne] when you update? I don\'t check this site daily, but I want to read your update the moment it is posted [hope that doesn\'t sound kind of desperate, lol]. Mm, thanks.

Update soon! <3

well you\'ve got another fan for your fic. awesome writing. i cannot wait for more ^_^

please update! i really loved it! makes me feel bad for mugen.

How did a story this good not come from me?!!! I\'m jealous of your writing and addicted to this story. Please update again and humanly possible.

Awww, poor Fuu! I check back often for updates on this story ^_^ IT\'s one of the best things I\'ve read all summer. Keep up the good work!

gotta say, didn\'t actually expect that. At least I didn\'t expect it last chapter, I sort of got it the second Fuu started throwing up. in retrospect, it all makes sense, and works well for a fuu/mugen supporter such as myself. either that or it works horribly. I dunno, the way you write is so complex and thoughtful everything has two sides to it. i always wanted you to have them end up together in some sort of permanent way, and guess i feel like mugen now - i won, but on the other hand, i lost terribly. now, other questions arise: abortions. What does fuu feel about them? Clearly Mugen would not appreciate the notion, but Fuu\'s really the one getting the short end of the stick here, soo... also, Jin: what does he feel about all this? looking forward to the next chapter. peace, rio grande.