rate_review Reviews

That was awesome! I loved it!

You write Mugen spot on, adding a few, well-appreciated, touches of your own. Not only is the sex between Fuu and Mugen terribly hot, but his growing feelings for her really made for some lovely angst. I am not certain if you are planning for her to \'come around\' and fall for Mugen, but I surely would like it. You are not afraid to write Mugen as the callous pirate he his - I enjoyed his rough, crude and realistic POV thoughout the story. You\'re the kind of writer that makes us love the bad boys :). Fuu was great as well. Her background and motivations were well done.

All your hard work writing this fic is greatly appreciated.

I see in your AN that you write Inuyasha as well. I\'ll have to check out that Ginta/Kag pairing soon - how original!

Loved it - squuueee!

*cries* Oh come on! This is killin\' me! I wanna read more! *sobs horribly*

Sweet stuff. I think Jin and Mugen need to have some one on one though. I\'m really curious about what Jin thinks.

This is great! Everyone is in character and their reactions are very believable, and the sex is, simply put, hot. I can\'t wait to read more, please post the new chapter soon!

I seriously LOVE your story! It\'s amazing, the relationship complexity is well done. All the character\'s are actually IN character which is great. And don\'t worry about people who have nothing better to do then bug you about spelling. Your writting is great and a mis-hap here or there is nothing to worry about. Anyway if you are still in need of a beta-reader I would love to help you out in that. You can e-mail me, and please update soon! This is the first SC story that I\'ve really loved here. I\'m going to go have to take you up on the suggestion and read addiction as well.

Sam (Little Emo)

This is such a wonderful storie. I was up until 3:00 am reading it on Sunday night. I get up around 6:00 to go to work. I guess I will have a long day ahead but, it was well worth it. This stories seems so real and I is the best Mugen/Fuu fic I have come across. Keep up the good work.

Long live Mugen and Fuu...and baby. I have one word for your writing: MASTERPIECE!!!!

OMG, i absolutely loved this chapter. I can\'t wait til you update again. this has been a good pick me up after being stuck in a van for 9 hours. SAER

As twisted as Mugen\'s feelings for Fuu are, I\'m glad he knocked her up. I hope they finally get their act together and become a complete couple. And I do hope Jin kicks Mugen\'s ass, just ONCE for getting poor Fu pregnant. He so deserves it. Amazingly brilliant chapter and story.

Update, update, update, UPDATE!