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July 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh my gosh, I freaking love this story! Mugen/Fuu all the way, baby!! You write so well; I can\'t wait for the next chapter! *begs for more*
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July 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really do like your portrayal of Fuu/
I actually thought that chapter three was
the end, though--- but I\'m not complaining.
I actually thought that chapter three was
the end, though--- but I\'m not complaining.
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July 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yoooo! How about your writing is the sh!t! Man, Fuu\'s pregnant...I ahve always liked Fuu and Mugen together anyway but this was unexpected! You gotta let me know when you update!!
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July 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOOO!!! Keep going! HURRY!! I just LOVE pregnant women stories. Good ones like these. Dunno why, I guess it\'s that cute girly thing peeping out that I usually keep tucked away.
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July 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'ve already read ur fic in the fanfiction.net, but I just can\'t help but to read it again. ohhhhhhh. please update if u have the time.
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July 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*sigh* Is that all! You stopped! Why can\'t it be never ending until the end. Wait that made now sense. Good story, please update soon!
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July 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You know when someone fucks like rabbits you get bunnies...but, really it was a great chapter and even a little heart-breaking. Yay! Little Mugen!
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July 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sup! I don\'t come across many writers who can create a believable fanfic nowadays. Samurai Champloo is on of my favorite animes and you captured the characters perfectly! Your fiction fits so easily with the anime. I know this isn\'t much of a review but keep up the good work! Please finish your fic and don\'t rush the ending.
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July 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is the most beautiful fic I have ever read.
Your way of creating such beautiful sentences with such precise, perfect words is amazing and really brings out all of the mixed emotions in the story. For the first time reading a fanfic, I was sitting here talking to the characters, mostly shouting in my mind, \'Mugen, tell you you love her!\' xD
Please continue this wonderful story, it kept me up until 4am slowly reading every passage. Kehe.
Your way of creating such beautiful sentences with such precise, perfect words is amazing and really brings out all of the mixed emotions in the story. For the first time reading a fanfic, I was sitting here talking to the characters, mostly shouting in my mind, \'Mugen, tell you you love her!\' xD
Please continue this wonderful story, it kept me up until 4am slowly reading every passage. Kehe.
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July 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I kind of saw the whole baby thing because she was throwing up for 3 months. I kind of hope Jin comes and has a part in the next chapter. He played a large role in the last chapter and he kind of showed he had some feeling for fuu. it\'s not that i don\'t want fuu/mugen i just want some fuu/jin too. I also don\'t think there is way for her to have a health baby when she hasn\'t eaten for 3 months. The baby should be dead with no nutrition.