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for The Electra Complex

by DeniPie

person Belle
schedule July 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I was SOOOOOOO waiting for this. I thought you MIGHT do it, just because you mentioned Fuu stopped taking her contraceptive tea, but I wasn\'t sure. I\'m glad you did and I must say, BIG SHOCK on Jin claiming to be the husband, I was surprised that Mugen didn\'t jump on that chance, just one more way to embarrass Fuu. Wonderful job, you must update soon, I just cannot get enought of this fic.
person Lyraelin
schedule July 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow...I can\'t believe it. Now THAT\'S a twist. I wonder what Jin will think.
person swasdiva
schedule July 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I might just be obsessed with this story. Sucks that I can barely keep my eyes open right now since it\'s so late, but damn it all if my heart is not mercilessly embroiled in the issues these two have. Their conditions are so stupidly painful that it\'s addictive to read, I guess like any juicy, convoluted soap opera. And believe me, I mean that as a compliment. This is Jerry Springer superficiality masking a feeling frighteningly familiar and sympathetic. Your expert writing expounds on that sting of nameless pain that everyone carries and is too damn tired, afraid, or jaded to face. It\'s the proverbial train wreck or roadside fender-bender that miles of passers-by feel the need to oogle. I just can\'t take my eyes off of this mess, because it\'s so confusing and yet something akin to memory.

And you manage to include hot smutt as well. I\'m tellin\' you, you as an author can do no wrong. This is probably the best fan fiction I\'ve ever read on this site, and most likely, ever in my existence. Abso-freakin\'-lutely amazing work.
person sesshy_lover
schedule July 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YAY!!!!!!!!!!!! FINALLY, AN UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! HOORAY!!!!!!!!!!! IVE BEEN WAITING FOR HOW MANY DAYS NOW... HMM... O WELL ITS UPDATED SO WHO CARES ANYHOW NOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I CHECKED 6 TIMES EVERYDAY FOR THIS CHAPTER TO SHOW UP AND I WAS PRETTY SURPRISED WHEN I SAW IT HERE FINALLY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! THANX SOOOOOOOOO MUCH AND PLEASE UPDATE ANOTHER CHAPTER SOON AGAIN!!!!!!!!!!!! ARIGATOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! JA NE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person Kami
schedule July 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I dont usally commment on fanFics... But, God...I HAD to say something! The way you wrote this Fic was Truly, truly amazing! as cliche as it may sound, the emotions and feelings that you were able to bring out of Fuu, & Mugen, etc. and make me feel were so thick and just Real... I mean... Im at a loss for words lol I am now official in love with you! hehe... Even though it says that you just updated this like, A week n 4 days ago... You must continute soon!! I almost peed my pants; I got so happy when you said you might put up 10Chps!! I literaly didnt want to stop reading without having finished the 3chps. Which really sucked because I started reading Chp 1 yesturday at like noon, but I was kicked off the computer ½ way through chp 2... And for the rest of the day, I was just stuck in a daydream of your Fic and the heavy stories you put Fuu & Mugen into lol I HAD to finish reading it ^-^ and Im so glad I did... but now I want more x3
So you see... you MUST update this SOON, ok... please lol and dont ever stop writing... because your to good at it... and Ill kill you if you do! Hope this motivates(sp?) you a lil\' bit more ^-^ lol
o0o, and quick question, what episode are you up to in Samurai Shamploo?? outside your Fics that is...


~*Kami
person LucKyo (not logged in)
schedule July 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'m not much for long, drawn out reviews, so I\'ll get to the point. This story left me breathless! It has to be the best, most well written in my opinion, Samurai Champloo story I have ever read. And as a huge fan of the Mugen/Fuu ship, I loved their rocky relationship. Can\'t wait to read more.
person Rowan
schedule July 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love your story. It\'s the best I\'ve ever seen, and I really hope you write more soon.
person Jane
schedule July 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yo,
You have a solid fic here. It reads well which is more than I can say for a lot of shit out there. I\'m not the best, but if you still need a beta I\'ll do it. I can\'t wait to see where this goes.
person Lyraelin
schedule July 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It\'s really well written, save for a few typos and such. I\'m sorry that I can\'t offer to beta for you, but I really like how it\'s going. Good job!
person alicia
schedule July 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
bravo!...that was really insightful and quite sad. I really wanted to cry...but good story :)

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