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*collapses* This is REALLY good!!! Keep it up! I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!! HAHAHAAHAHAHA!!!!

I\'m going to be blunt with. I frankly thought that this was:





F U C K I N G A M A Z I N G
I thank the Lord for authors like you.

Oh pleaseeeee!!!!!!!!! youre KILLING me, i need to have more NOW or else i will KILL myself!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! please update soon... REALLY soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! FINALLY MUGEN FALLS FOR FUU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! HAPINESS IS FOR ALL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! EXCEPT ONE THING THAT KEEPS ME VERY VERY SAD... AND EVIL CLIFFE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! PLEASEEEEE UPDATE SOOOOOOOOOOOOONNNNNNNN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! WOW THAT TOOK ALMOST FOREVER TO WRITE!!!!!!!!!!!!...

I love this fanfic... The best I have ever read!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Please write another chapter soon, or else I will continue sulking in the corner, crying. I know many other fans say the same thing, but most of us really actually mean it a lot more than you think!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! So, pleaseeeeeee!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Were suffering here!!!!!!!!!!!!

I think this chapter was better than the last two, I\'m addicted to this story, and I can\'t wait for an update.

yay you updated. I love this chapter. It was good.

Awww....man, that was so beautiful, deep type sh!t! That was poetry, hip-hop, etc. I dig Mugen and Fuu together anyway. Wow, like I\'m working on my first S.C. fic but after reading yours, I\'m shook....I may not post it...lol Keep up the good work:)

Well, I wanted them to end up together, so I guess I got what I wished for. Until Fuu regains consciousness, anyway. In all seriousness though, lovely chapter. Jin remained good and silent, only an image in Fuu and Mugen\'s minds. Mugen went appropriately mad, his reaction was really portrayed wonderfully and seemed utterly in character for him. The desecration of Fuu\'s image of Jin was really heart jerking and poignant as well. I wonder how it will change her outlook in the next chapter. I had no idea you were going to make this fic ten chapters long, by the way! Not that it couldn\'t be, it would just require more of an actiony plot, like with them doing more then fucking and feeling bad about being whores who fuck all the time. Or there could just be ten chapters of that. Whatever you do, I\'m sure it will be great, because this fic is great and deserves the sequel you\'re going to make.
If you still desperately need a beta reader later, I could potentially volunteer, only I\'ve never done it before and I\'m going away for two weeks after July eighth and won\'t be able to get to a computer... clearly I\'m not a prime candidate, but if it\'s for the sake of the story....
come out with the next chapter soon, and don\'t let the man get you down,
Rio

This is one of the best dam fic\'s i have ever read! I wonder is Fuu going to ever fall in love with Mugen? Anyways please please please update soon!