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That was good

update

Awesome characterization of Mugen and Fuu in this chapter as well. The parallels between Tatsuko and Mugen are very interesting. The only thing I might suggest is that you don\'t really need to put \"flashback\" and \"end flashback\" around your flashbacks because they\'re so short. I think that it would be sufficient to just leave them italicized. Of course, that is only my opinion, and that and about 65 cents will get you a candy bar from a vending machine. I apologize if that offends you. Keep up the good work. ^_^

why are the words cut off, i only read first chapter and it already got really annoying?

i\'m talking about the 3rd chapter by the way

You are an incredible writer, for starters. I love all of the songs you put in the beginning of this fic, and all of your fics, actually. I also really enjoyed the story behind Fuu\'s past, it was beautifully described and almost felt realistic, like I was reading some sort of an extension from Memoirs of a Geisha. (If you have not read this book, though I suspect you have, I highly recommend it.) Not to mention the way Jin\'s character is portrayed so far is really great - he\'s just this sort of untouchable character on the side line of Mugen and Fuu\'s crazy sex lives. I almost hope his part is never made any greater than that, although this might stem from the fact that I\'m kind of a Mugen/Fuu supporter and I like all of the focus their relationship is getting right now. But I\'m not going to hold my breath for that to pan out or anything, so far you haven\'t really shown yourself to be an author who enjoys fairy tale endings. You could tell me right now that the story finishes with Mugen marrying a prostitute and Fuu turning into a terribly disfigured paraplegic and I\'d totally believe you. (Also, not that Fuu and Mugen getting together would be fairy tale like on any level.) I don\'t really have any critisiscms to make because you are a far superior writer to me so you\'ll just have to be satisfied with a glowing review about how much I adore this fic and hope you finish it, whatever wholly depressing direction it may (or may not!) take. pace, xoxo
Rio Grande

* LETS OUT BREATH...* OH MY FREAKIN GOD... THAT HAS GOT TO BE THE BEST FANFIC I HAVE EVER READ!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! IM A BIG MUGEN LOVER AND ALTHOUGH I LOVE JIN TOO... I LOVE MUGEN MORE BECAUSE UNDER ALL THAT THOUGH EXTERIOR, IS A SOFT SIDE WHOM REALLY CARES FOR FUU. LIKE THE ONE TIME WHEN FUU GOT KIDNAPPED, IT WAS MUGEN WHO CURSED AND WENT AFTER HER, NOT JIN... WHY DOES FUU HAVE TO LIKE JIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!! DAMMIT ALL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! PLEASE ALLOW FUU TO FALL FOR MUGEN TOWARDS THE END PLEEEEEEAAAAAASSSSEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I WILL BE FOREVER INDEPTED (HOWEVER YOU SPELL IT) TO YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! SO WILL ALL OF MY FRIENDS WHOM I HAVE INTRODUCED THIS FANFIC TO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!... PLEASEEEE UPDATE SOON AND DONT MAKE ME DISAPOINTED!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!... ^___^

Oh my gosh!!!!!!! This is a very good story if I say so myself!... my friend, sesshy_lover... introduced me to this fic and I got hooked and addicted to it. I have read this story about 8 times and I would appreciate it if you updated another chapter! NO.... YOU BETTER UPDATE NOW OR ELSE I WILL PLUNGE MY HOOK INTO YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!... *cough cough...* Ummm... please excuse my harsh tone of voice and mild violence and language... ahem...

This chapter was so good. I love the way you write. Please update when you can!!

Wow. That\'s a really emotional story. Very fitting even for Mugen. Good job! I wanna read more! :D

Woah, I really liked this and i hope you write more. I dunno why but your writing had sucked me in.
SAER