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Beautiful...Enticing, emotional, captivating, heart-felt. It's not the usual fairy tale ending where everything is all "happy." Very REALISTIC. I felt Fuu's emotions as well as the other characters...it made me CRY... I loved it!!! . Great job!!!! Keep on writing!

Nothing but brilliance from start to finish with this story. One of the best SC stories ever written and a personal favorite of mine. You've made the characters more real than anything I've ever read before and I'm more of a Mugen/Fuu fan than ever because of it. I eagerly await anything you post next.

Alright, that\'s it! I love bittersweet endings! Perfect ending...just right!

A satisfying ending to an action-packed story. I found your portrayals very true to character for all three: Jin the stoic warrior, Fuu the emotional, stumbling teen and Mugen the unbounded improvisor and pure fighter. The pairing of Mugen and Fuu was believable, although her extreme youth made it sometimes painful to read the abuse Mugen would subject her to at times.

No, I didn\'t expect twins-- nice twist. Fuu will have her hands full with that pair.

The scene with Jin at the end was so touching-- beautifully and perfectly written. Poor Fuu couldn\'t have the man she wanted, but the affection and respect remained on both sides at the end.

I look forward to a continuation in the form of a sequel, if one is planned.

Nice job. :-)

Great story--I loved it. The ending was appropriate and flawless, but I can’t wait for the continuation. I was actually hoping the baby/ies would be female. I thought that would serve Mugen right; boys will just inflate his ego and make him even more difficult to deal with. Girls would throw him completely off-balance and make him doubt every philosophy he’s ever subscribed to. Boys will be a handful of hell for Fuu though. Thank you for this fic--it was the best I’ve ever read on this site, and even better, it was my favorite pairing to one of my favorite animes. I’ll be waiting impatiently for your next post.

Awww, it makes me sad that it\'s now over. ;__; It\'s one of my most fav fics of all time! ^_________^

What!? That CAN\'T be the END!!! Aw, man! It was excellent, your story is the best I\'ve read on here. But the END?? I was hoping I\'d atleast get to see a wedding or something. I\'m sad now, that\'s just really depressing. Can you write just one more chapter? Maybe about what their lives are like now after the kids are born, or maybe Mugen\'s plans with Fuu? You don\'t have to. I just think people would take the ending a bit easier if you did. Great work, though, I love it.

*cries* COME BACK JIN!! You son of a bitch.. *sighs heavily* There\'s another man that disapoints me.. lol oh well. Awesome, absolutely awesome! And make it both, I know Mugen would be the over-protective father of a daughter, even if he would never admit it and try to play it off, but I could see him freaking out everytime she even talked to the oposite sex. As for a son, heh, I could see him be proud over anything that kid ever does. Belch, fart, kick the neighbor\'s dog. Yeah, he\'d be proud. >_<

I\'m sad at the way it ended. I guess I really wanted Fuu to end up with Jin. Well I guess that\'s the end of my dream. I didn\'t expect twins. I frankly thought you were going to kill the baby. Well I\'m suprised. I can\'t wait for the sequel.

This was a frickin awesome ending! When fuu was giving birth and there was that moment where you didn\'t know what was going on, I thought she had like a baby with two heads, i was on the edge of my chair! Good idea with the twins, any story i\'ve ever read it\'s always boy/girl set of twins. anyways awesome job, I totally loved it! SAER