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Haha, those people would be me.

And I was half expecting Fuu to die at childbirth---
pessimistic, yes--- But she died in \'Pedophilia Dreams\'
so I was thinking that you\'d start some pattern. But I\'m
glad she didn\'t--- even though it seemed like she did [I
was almost hyperventalating at this point]. And I actually
imagined the baby to be a boy. Just not two.

And now, all I see are these little asian babies with afros. XP
I hope you either make a sequel or start on another SC fanfic.
God knows we need something good to keep all of us readers
interested in the series.

wow i love this story. that was a great ending.

Hey, hey! Awesome fanfic, Deni Pie! I love the characters and the visual eye candy with the sexual tension between Muen and my main girl Fuu! I\'ve seen the whole series too and I have to say u do a hot job at being realistic without bing OOC. That\'s hot ;)
Oh yeah, by the way, did you ever get that song \'Abandon\' with Katie Holmes, cuz\' if ya didn\'t just email me, and can try and get it for you no prob!

By the way, I can\'t WAIT for the next juicy chapter and the sequel. I\'m hoppin\' on my toes. LOL Anyway, awesome job with the story so far and update soon!

You need to name the kid Musashi... as in Miyamoto Musashi. LOL You just know Mugen would want to name a kid that... (assuming it\'s a boy).

Sorry to hear about your accident. The chapter with Fuu\'s pregnancy worries was hilarious. Some of the insult that Fuu and Mugen were lobbing at one another in their minds had me rolling!

The whorehouse seen was so twisted, that\'s it, it was twisted bonding. I guess those two have to take what they can get. (did I mention that I loved your writing?)

Loved all the new chapters. Your writing is marvelous. Did anyone ever win that commisioned fic for finding the \'Abandon\' stuff?

Omg... Update soon! Pretty please!! *dies* I feel so unfulfilled! Or however you spell it... blah >_<

Two words: Bitchin\' story. Four more words. Can\'t. Wait. For. Sequel.

Rock on, lil\' mama


Much Luv,
Number one fan, Vylest

“Yes, you dummy!” She snapped. “I think that’s why they got bigger. I don’t have to tell you how women feed babies, do I?” She asked, her face partially going green with the thought.

Mugen snorted in amusement at her discomfort. “Nah, I think I got the picture.” He drawled, licking at some of the remaining liquid on his knuckle. “So you’re sort of like a human cow?”


Damnit, that was the best line ever! Mugen is such an ass...a funny ass, but an ass nonetheless. Love the story!!!!!!