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for The Electra Complex

by DeniPie

schedule October 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh, my aching heart.
I love this story. It\'s so sad.
This last chapter has to be my favorite so far, too.
Please... more, soon?
person alicia
schedule October 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Fuckin\' funny...that\'s all I\'m gonna say...I was just waitin\' for Mugen to get a bitchin\' out, but instead he gets sobbed on! Poor Fuu and her crazy mood swings...(boy, I hope pregnancy isn\'t really like that...:() Wonderful chapter, though...I love the length too...it makes them worth the wait!
person Shampoo
schedule October 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
The writing never disappoints! Another great chapter.
person boo
schedule October 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay!! Another update! Oh, how I love this story!!
person Vylest
schedule October 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I totally LOVE this story! There aren\'t many Mugen/Fuu pairing out there that not only keep them in character but also make it spicy! Please oh please update soon! I\'m serious, this story is frickin\' awesome! Much love--Vylest ;)
person Meg
schedule October 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*dances* YAY!! But I can\'t stand what will become of Jin. The thought kills me, I swear it! lol
person LaDeDa
schedule October 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You know, I never thought I\'d say this, but I think you made Mugen too cruel. I probably wouldn\'t have said that before chapter 5 though. Maybe. I don\'t know. I can\'t imagine that even Mugen could meet someone whose situation he could identify with and who was genuinely kind to him and just kill him, without even a thought of remorse afterwards. Even early on in the show, say for instance, the Dutch guy, he had perfect motive to just kill him, and he didn\'t. And Mugen actually grows a lot over the course of the show.
Also, I don\'t know where people get the idea of Fuu being so madly in love with Jin, and despising Mugen so much. Jin isn\'t exactly a poster boy for moral rectitude either. I daresay he gets at least a little kick out of the killing, too. Though it fit well into Fuu\'s whole daddy issues thing, so I can\'t quite blame you.
But the characters as you paint them you seem to have great insight into. They are very real, psychologically. And their interplay, while twisted, I have to say, is quite an impressive feat. You\'re very good at expressing it, as well.
I think my problem is I just can\'t understand how it can be satisfying to write a fic like this. Maybe I\'m just not wired that way.
person Meg
schedule October 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*claws at eyes* Omg! I need MORE!! *dies*
person Anon
schedule October 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really don\'t say this to many people.Mainly because it shouldn\'t be said to them.but your characterization is superb and your writing style is wonderful. I KNOW this is exacly how the characters would react in this situation. I know the SC fandom isn
t very large, but you are definetely one of the best additions to it.

-II VW (thats my signature)
person SeeSee
schedule October 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow! You did it again. I was so excited when I seen you had update. I hope you are feeling well and that you are taking care of yourself after your accident. All of your fans are happy that you took the time to update your wonderful story. (All fans say \"We love ya\"). Take care and keep up the good work kid!!!!

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