rate_review Reviews

Dude wright more! now! i mean right now! it was awesome! I live the pairing but i didn\'t like it when fuu got pregnant but you made it work out. so i give you ten thumbs up! update soon and email me when you do! laterz

My goodness, you\'ve written another brilliant chapter. My mouth literally droped from the first sentence to the end. You definitely have a good handle on these characters. And now I\'m dying of curiousity on what Fuu is going to do now. And will Mugen ever grow a conscious and understand the consequences of his actions...probably not. And where the heck is Jin and why hasn\'t he said something yet?! I can\'t wait for more.

glad to have another chappy out! i luv this story, its very well done. i\'m glad that you came out of your accident okay. i hope that you feel better and get completely well soon. ^_^

Woo!! Keep it up!! I just LOVE this story! Absolutely ADORE this story!!

O_O *PINCHES MYSELF* THAT WAS FRIGGEN AWESOME!!! >_< IM NOT DREAMING RIGHT!!!??? YOU REALLY DID UPDATE THIS WONDEROUS CHAPTER RIGHT!!!!!????? OMG THANK YOU SO MUCH!!! I KEPT CHECKING TO SEE IF YOU UPDATED YET!!!... HOWEVER, I DIDNT EXPECT MUGEN TO BE THAT HEARTLESS THOUGH. LOL... AND WHEN WILL JIN FALL IN LOVE WITH FUU!!!??? BWAHAHAHHAHA!!! PLEASE NOW IM GONNA GO SULK IN A CORNER FOR ANOTHER EXCELLENT CHAPTER TO COME... *NODS*

I really enjoyed this and hope for more chapters. WRITE MORE

holy crap this was freakin awesome.....well worth the wait..........im so emotionally confused.....mugen\'s intentions were nice its just how he got the money.....now that is what you call messing with the reader\'s head..........i hope fuu can realize that just cause it\'s mugens baby does not mean it will turn out like mugen, she has a chance to make sure it dosen\'t............i hope she is able to bond with the baby i mean it will be living inside her for 9 months that is plenty of time to form a bond...........and where the hell did jin go......did he leave?........i so want to know his pov on this.......oh please update really really really soon....please ^_^

*Mouth drops* Dammmnnnn, Mugen!! Of all the people to kill, and in such a abrutal way, he had to rob the man with the pregnant wife! I don\'t blame Fuu for being horrified by her situation. Especially now. One question though. Has Jin made a break for it and left the group? Anyway, another brilliant chapter.

~~~Shampoo~~~

Thank you for this. I\'m a die-hard Mugen fan-girl and there just aren\'t enough stories that do him justice. I like that you haven\'t softened up his personality just because he\'s in love. In fact, I think you\'ve nailed him perfectly. I like the direction you\'ve taken with Fuu as well--complicating and building her instead of stripping her faults to two-dimensional quirks to keep her sympathetic. This story doesn\'t deviate from the established personalities or overall tone of the show, yet it\'s not boxed in by those things either; you\'ve branched out in a realistic way. On top of all that, it\'s well written. I’m so jealous you wrote it instead of me. Fucking wonderful--keep it up.

that was great.