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for The Electra Complex

by DeniPie

person Meg
schedule September 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
omg... you\'re never gonna update... are you? *sniffles*
person Raeysama
schedule September 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This Story is excellent. Well written and put together. I really hope that your going to finnish.
person Lee
schedule September 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well I can see that this story hasn\'t been updated in a long while so asking for more would probably be pointless, but I can\'t help it I\'m absolutley digging this story. You pretty much got Mugen pegged dead on, not an easy matter as I\'ve found out with other stories, and Fuu well a little OOC hasn\'t ever hurt anybody. I actually like her better this way :) If by chance you are still checking your reviews than please, please, PLEASE!!! Write more.
person Anon
schedule August 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
come on more more more very good
person Anon
schedule August 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This fic is amazing! In particular, I like how Mugen\'s capacity to feel softer emotions is so awkwardly developing. I am very much looking forward to the next chapters!
person OnlyAThreat
schedule August 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
...sigh...I love this story. I think it\'s so realistic to how they would really act had they gotten together in the show.

As for seeing the pregnancy thing, once ya mention vomiting a lot it\'s the first thing I think of. Go fig.

KEEP WRITING DAMNIT. Please :)
person Mhika
schedule August 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Pregnant!! I kinda saw it coming but I didn\'t want to admit it. A child in their sex-hate relationship is just...so complicating. The river scene was adorable. I loved it! Please, please continue!!
schedule August 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
holy..shit....yeah...it was pretty much predicted that she would get pregnant...i mean, come ON..she\'s been having sex with him so much..ever since the vomitting and the \"stopped taking yaro\" part...being pregnant was pretty much in the bag. anywho, update soon! ^^ can\'t wait for what happens next...let\'s hope mugen will start actually CARING for her...
person Jaded Minx
schedule August 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow,
Unbelievable, what a dark, amazingly wonderful piece you have here. Excellent job, the chapters are so long and so detailed and you made Fuu\'s character so complex (which really wasn\'t done in the series) and you pulled it off. I love it and look forward to more chapters.
person EvY
schedule August 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG i completely adore this fic. you MUST update soon, ill look foward to it!!!!!

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