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for Crystal Flaws - Part 05 Crystal Ties

by LunaHope

person Scorpinac
schedule July 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
An enthralling finale, my dear! Absolutely enthralling! And I can just see the future arguments now as Sirrah gets jealous of Rini(MII) getting to be the next Sailor Moon after their momma - possibly with Sirrah discovering she\'s inherited her grandpa\'s rose trick, hehehe... Laters!
person deep serenity
schedule July 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
great chapter 7! LOL, at all the pregnant people. Would have liked a little more Serena being a grandmother and how she felt, but can\'t have everything

I can\'t wait for the continuation I can tell already it will be very creative and original

also can\'t wait for the Beryl story either, I think this will be a chance for everyone to see what lead her to become so evil....afterall her hate had to come from somewhere.

Great job!
person Scorpinac
schedule July 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well, everything seems to be wrapping up nicely. But how many is Ceres having? After all, Castor is one of a set of QUADS!!!! And the human female isn\'t really made for extensive litters! Actually, this last chapter could have easily been broken in two, the division being after Terrance gets the ring from Endymion and the second half being his trip to see Hotaru at Saturn - which brings up yet another reminder: Saturn, like Jupiter, Uranus, and Neptune, can only be colonized if you use a floating city of Bespin type setup. Gas giant = no ground! Okay, I\'m guessing next chapter we finally do a nice long time jump to the birht of the babies, maybe pausing to do Ceres & Castor\'s/Terrance & Hotaru8\'s nuptials(and possibly the beginning of relationships between Jun/Jabbath, Ves/Volans, and Pallas/Pollux!). Well, laters!
person deep serenity
schedule July 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
chap 5-wow, loved the kiss scene with hotaru!!!!!!!! LMAO it was so cute and mina is just great in this chap, sorry for taking so long to review love where this is going and about time someone clued castor in!
person Deep Serenity
schedule July 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
chap 6, LMAO, so loved the venus and terrance scene! I like how you protray her, I have always thought she is understated in most people\'s fics.

ahhhhhh the soft playful side of hotaru\'s was great and nice lemon, stupid Terrance he should have come prepared(hope she doesn\'t get preg, but your story)

this was a good full chap and excited that theres one more left,
great job
person Scorpinac
schedule July 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well, that was a long one. At least there\'s hope for Ceres and Castor. Now, when will the other bros. realize they want to be with Palla, Jun, and Ves? And when will Hotaru realize she wants Terrance? Or is he going to decide to run off after her?! Can\'t wait for more! Laters!
person Scorpinac
schedule July 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh, and of all the possibilites of who sent of Terrance, Venus was no where on the list. Interesting talent she\'s got there. Well, again, laters!
person Scorpinac
schedule June 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
\"NOW a Prophecy?!\", to paraphrase \"Death Becomes Her\"(one of my favs, actually.) Oh, dear, it seems Castor and Cere are having problems of some kind... Don\'t suppose next time we get to \"rewind\" and find out what kept him? Well, eagerly await the next chapter, laters!
person inuficcrzy
schedule June 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
love you entire series, it\'s awesome!

needed to say that. but now on to the questions. what\'s wrong with castor and ceres? could it be that something happened, physically, that they weren\'t ready for? is the tattoo giving him problems?

and will any of the other asteroid senshi choose a pegasus brother? i think that would definately be interesting!
person Deep Serenity
schedule June 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
chap 4 was great, love that she\'s a princess in her own right and kingdom! and it was touching that they made it together, Love how MIna was the smart one in this!!!!!!! She is one of my favs

Oh, and Castor will have to tell the truth soon..... Poor Ceres!

deep chapter!

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