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June 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh, my, did Ceres and Castor do something \"inappropriate\" while on their date? My, but these Pegasus folk do work fast. Hehehe... ;) Laters!
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June 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hello,
I stayed up late to finish reading your story. I LOVED IT! I loved how everyone behaved. I appreciated that you explained your view of Elios\' past. I gathered bits and pieces of it from manga and tv show, but still had yet to understand it. Your point of view\'s explanation cleared things up. I liked how the characters had fun in both elegant/conservative and common/scandalous ways. Elios and Chibiusa are among my fave SM couples. Dang, Elios got me hot and bothered in this tale. His insecurity touched me. I frieked at the past about Darien\'s past fling with Beryl. I hated her for destroying lives, but pitied her since she did it due to a broken heart. Love makes us do crazy things, both positive and negative. Also, I liked the idea that Elios\' earnest, unselfish prayers nurtures the earth. And selfish, negative ones stifle it. I never saw prayer in such a light. Interesting. I JUST LOVE HOW YOU SEE THE WORLD! I pouted at the part where ChibiUsa told Elios never to tie her to his bed. Did she mean it, or was she jesting? Also, I liked that in your vision of the future, Haruka and Michiru were allowed to be together. It saddens me that in this time, our current ruler lies to the world, claiming that our/his kingdom allows everyone to practice their full God-given rights. Yet at the same time, he and his court of yes-jesters divorced many good gay couples, and prevent others from wedding. Joel Osteen, one of my few fave preachers, says that in Heaven, there are various groups of good people inter-mingled.
I stayed up late to finish reading your story. I LOVED IT! I loved how everyone behaved. I appreciated that you explained your view of Elios\' past. I gathered bits and pieces of it from manga and tv show, but still had yet to understand it. Your point of view\'s explanation cleared things up. I liked how the characters had fun in both elegant/conservative and common/scandalous ways. Elios and Chibiusa are among my fave SM couples. Dang, Elios got me hot and bothered in this tale. His insecurity touched me. I frieked at the past about Darien\'s past fling with Beryl. I hated her for destroying lives, but pitied her since she did it due to a broken heart. Love makes us do crazy things, both positive and negative. Also, I liked the idea that Elios\' earnest, unselfish prayers nurtures the earth. And selfish, negative ones stifle it. I never saw prayer in such a light. Interesting. I JUST LOVE HOW YOU SEE THE WORLD! I pouted at the part where ChibiUsa told Elios never to tie her to his bed. Did she mean it, or was she jesting? Also, I liked that in your vision of the future, Haruka and Michiru were allowed to be together. It saddens me that in this time, our current ruler lies to the world, claiming that our/his kingdom allows everyone to practice their full God-given rights. Yet at the same time, he and his court of yes-jesters divorced many good gay couples, and prevent others from wedding. Joel Osteen, one of my few fave preachers, says that in Heaven, there are various groups of good people inter-mingled.
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June 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WHAT you can\'t stop there!!!!!!!!!!!!! LOL, wow what a cliffy!
I thought it was great, the whole tatto thing is lovely and creative.
Did Ceres ....ummm sleep with him and is now his wife and she wasn\'t planning on that?
Wow and Serena playing the match maker again! this was a great chapter!
I thought it was great, the whole tatto thing is lovely and creative.
Did Ceres ....ummm sleep with him and is now his wife and she wasn\'t planning on that?
Wow and Serena playing the match maker again! this was a great chapter!
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June 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hmm, relationships abounding. Promising. And interesting discussion on how the human-form/Pegasus-form transformations work, well done. Hope to see more soon, and are you sure there isn\'t enough here for a 6TH book? Cause it\'s starting to feel that way, honest. Laters!
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June 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
well thing are moving along!(chap 2) can\'t wait to see what Amara and Michelle think of Hotaru dating!
love the scene were Ceres and Castro(did I spell that right, if not opps) were having trouble understanding what each other meant....it showed how their worlds were different!
Good job
love the scene were Ceres and Castro(did I spell that right, if not opps) were having trouble understanding what each other meant....it showed how their worlds were different!
Good job
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June 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
a bit confusing but i like it. Who are the Astroid Senshi and Castor? I do not remember them from the anime. Please explain.
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June 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I was sort of hoping for some skinny dipping action from the Quartet and their new horsie boyfriends, but clearly they\'r elearning from Rini and Helios\'s little \"mistake\". Ah, well. Last scene in the library was cute, look forward to seeing how that relationship works out. Laters!
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June 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YAY!, This chap was great! loved everything about it, THe whole Serena thing as queen and her feeling was just what the story needed and whoa! kissing on the beach romantic, loved seeing them as young adults relaxing and Hotaru and Terrance!!!!!!!!!!!! so sweet and fitting of their personalities.
Excellent start!
Excellent start!