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June 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I look forward to see more of this interesting story in the future.
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June 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Damn impressive chapter 2
*Glares*
Shinoubu better make good on her oath and be Keitaro\'s slut! along With Motoko as Keitaro\'s secxond slut!!
Heh the Hina Ho\'s lol
*Glares*
Shinoubu better make good on her oath and be Keitaro\'s slut! along With Motoko as Keitaro\'s secxond slut!!
Heh the Hina Ho\'s lol
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June 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey, its good, if you do properly, it can became realy good, the lime scene in Shinobu\'s dream was good, keep the same level whit the other girls.
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June 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ok this is starting to make sense.
next chapter plz
soon
next chapter plz
soon
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June 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You made a good chapter! Can\'t wait to read the next one!
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June 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I FEEL THE POWER! Good read, hilarious ending. I\'d love to see more, especially considering you have a readable writing style. More often than not we encounter writers who forget some very important basics...Ah well, whatever. Good first work, I\'d love to see how this turns out.
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June 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I hope you write more, because I want to see were this fic will head. And I think tama-chan is female.
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June 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Even though you didn\'t put a lemon scene in, I thought it was funny! So I hope you put in another chapter soon! And I hope it will be even funnier!
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June 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
MORE!!!!!!!!!! MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! please god write more.
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June 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
has this got someting to do with hitchhickers guide to the galxy.
want to see more
want to see more