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by elantiel

person Silenced Aya
schedule September 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
It seemed fast because it's not finished. Do continue the story, it would indeed be much apriceated.

-Fujimiya
person CianaRui
schedule July 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I am loving the humor of this story! Yoji is absolutely insufferable with his sarcasm and oh so hilarious. The story line is interesting and the characters are very well written. I find your original character Josh intriguing. He seems very innocent if eccentric.
I also enjoyed the use of the \"Velvetin Rabbit\"[ sorry, I am a horrendous speller]. It was odd coming from Aya, but it gives some insight into the fact that in his \'previous life\' he was actually young and human, just like everyone else.
I also appreciate the fact that you spend some time developing the women of Weiss/ Kritiker. We really never see much of either of them, other than the obvious mission assigning duties. Well done.
Please update soon! I am looking foward to the next installment.
person shawnell
schedule June 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please continue your story I find it very interesting!^_^ Especially since I\'m a aya and youji fan.
person bewsbud
schedule June 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I read this quite a while ago, and I\'m thrilled to see it here.
I hope this means you\'ll be continuing to update. I really look forward to reading it through to the end.

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