rate_review Reviews

I already read and loved this fic when you first posted it, but I\'m not sure if I reviewed so I\'ll just make sure and review now! ^_^

I love fics that are twisted and evil, and yours is definitely one of the best WK fics I\'ve ever read. Usually I don\'t like the kind \"fragmented\" style you employed, but it works perfectly with this. In a way I feel really sorry for Schuldig, and in a way... well, I don\'t. Schadenfreude and all that ^_~ Brad is just enough of a total bastard and control freak that I think he\'d be able to do this kind of thing. And to all of his teammates, if I understood that right.

Please write more, it would be a shame if you didn\'t!

Disturbing yet erotic (or maybe I\'m just a seriously sick and twisted puppy...probably). I think the broken sentances worked well with what you were trying to do. I didn\'t find it distracting and think it went well with the gasping feel of both Schu and Brad.

wow.. very evil brad... but I LOVE it.. so uniquley written.. you can really get into poor schu\'s perspective. Awesome if I do say so... write another soon!