rate_review Reviews

At first I need to say that the last two sentences in the first part are really, really scary. \"Here is my verhaal\". *shivers a bit* Omi sounds so cold, so distanced... So old. He really sounds like he is ninety, not twenty-nine. That\'s sad.
The next part - Mamoru - is short, but kinda happy in the beginning. He has his brothers. But then come those kidnappers, and things go all wrong. I can\'t say a lot now, except I\'d like to see the other stories. And know what happened to his lover.
I just love the way you make Omi tell this story. It\'s scaring me, but at the same time it\'s so melancholy I want to cry.

- Heta N.

Very good, well written. Its hard to comment, though, there isn\'t much posted yet. *scolds* update!

Fascinating glimpses, and I fear, tragedy. Your writing is excellent, if brief, and I look forward to more.