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person Hakushaku_Cain
schedule October 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You write quite well, but I\'m not terribly fond of OC... More often, they\'re just blatant Mary Sue (just too perfect, too strong, not interesting anymore...)
that\'s too bad you don\'t like the other pairings... I would have love your fic more...
But anyway, please keep on this fic, it\'s well written...
person tenchi
schedule August 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i really like this fic will you please update ty

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