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Oooh! I really like this! Very angsty.

Waiting for your next chapter!!!

~Lee

good job! can't wait to see what happens next! keep up the great work!

kimper :)

AAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
MORE, NOW!!!!!!!!!!

please update soon i love this story

Oh, jeeze! Please, PLEASE update this soon! There are so few good YukixKyo fics out there, and this is by far the most captivating one I\'ve read yet. I\'ll be keeping an eye out! <3

Wow I really like this story.

I just read volume 11, and you were very creative to create a fanfiction about Kyo\'s fate and twisting it to befall on Yuki.

The story is bittersweet, and I love the blossoming feelings between Kyo and Yuki. Great job, I can’t wait for the next chapter.

I write short chapters so I won\'t complain about them, but they do go by quickly.

the main characters do know about Akito\'s.... um... condition. since Akito was raised.... as he was... everyone just got used to calling Akito as such. read spoilers for chapters 100-103 I believe/

I\'m highly impressed by this story of yours. You get deeply into the characters\' minds and how they think. It\'s amazing how well you read the characters and their reactions. I don\'t find any of them out of character, and that is extremely rare to find. I like how you didn\'t just jump the gun and paired them together right off the back. You\'re giving them time to progress like people in real life. They\'ll grow as time in the story moves, and they\'ll get closer as they interact more. However, Kyou\'s character is probably going to frustrate me later on. He\'s just so shy and acts on impulse. He\'ll probably be indecisive to visit Yuki again. I love Kyou, but what a head he has on his shoulders. Yuki manages to surprise me. Perhaps he called Kyou by his name because there\'s no need to be so childish anymore. There\'s nothing left fighting for, so there\'s no need to continue with his \"hatred\" for the \"baka neko\". It\'s petty. Just like he wanted others to move on, he himself has to drift with time too. On with analyzing the story instead of the characters... This was written very nicely. Although I\'d have to read the story over to check for errors, I find that I was too entranced by the story itself to pay attention to the detailed sentences, even though I did stop a few times to read over the words because of the way it was written. Very complex at certain areas. One point was at Akito\'s speech. I had to read that over. I was stunned at the turn of events and the way you wrote that section. It seems as if you\'re nourishing their story so it can reach its full potential. I\'m glad I came across this work of fiction. I do hope you continue to work on this. Besides, this pairing is extremely addicting and quite adorable, ne? It\'s nice to find something worth reading on this site. Good luck. Ganbatte.

Jeeze, this is really good. Not too sure where you are going with it, in terms of Yuki and Kyo, but be it yaoi or friendship I can definately see myself coming back to find out. Reading this is like watching a spider weave it\'s web, and I just cannot wait to see how it comes out. Please update soon!