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by Cellerikun

person Uncle_Bert_9731
schedule November 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YAY! I\'VE WANTED TO SEE FUU AND MUGEN GANG UP ON JIN! FUCKIN\' HOT! YEEA--EEEAAH! thank you! holy shit that was good! ........... O.o ..... I need a towel..... >.<
person Zekkita
schedule October 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Totally hot. You even had them stay in character. Make chapter 2 ;0)
person SMS
schedule September 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
best threesome i\'ve read yet. keep up the good work...the only thing is i wish it was longer...^_^
person everyday angel
schedule August 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Have I reviewed this one yet? I can\'t remember. It\'s damn sexy anyway, though. Samurai Champloo threesomes rock my socks.
person kitsune
schedule August 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
awsome. that was a very cool story. any more stories like this from you?
person tmpfan
schedule August 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
\"She skips away to a second supper, and he passes out,\" Jin muses aloud, somewhere between amused and exasperated. \"How fitting.\"
Best line in the entire story, I think Fuu is the real winner here. Anyways, you might what to go back and reread your story to fix some words around, but I still like it.
person CrazzyGirl99
schedule August 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was a cut little ending w/ mugen\'s saying i realy liked it if it\'s not a one-shot keep going and if it is a one-shot keep going. I\'ll keep reviewing as long as u keep writting
person Anon
schedule July 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was AMAZING! You did a wonderful job capturing their relationship in one moment. That was just very good writing indeed.
person tdk
schedule July 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Damn, that was hot! I loved it. You wrote my favorite pairing(s) just how I like it.
person steph
schedule July 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was *hot*. Mamma likey.

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