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by Cellerikun

schedule July 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
THAT\'S HOT......ALL I CAN SAY \'BOUT THAT!!1!
person Shorty*
schedule July 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh my. I\'d just started thinking bad thoughts about those 3 traveling together too. I love how you got then to gang up on Jin and *gasp* made him talk! ;) It\'s strangely fitting in someway for it to happen that way. Nice writing.
person Sel
schedule July 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Extremely, extremely, well-written. And erotic and just, wow. Kudos to you *o* and I\'m off to check if you have other fanfiction... *cough*
person Anon
schedule July 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow!!!!! :)
schedule June 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ME LIKEY!
That was so good! You have no idea how good...
*laughing wickedly*

That has to be the most in character three way I\'ve ever read.
It also shows what it takes to get a whimper out of Jin ^_^
person MeLaiya
schedule June 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG I so loved this, keep up the good work and update update update
person Mira
schedule June 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I very much liked that this rotated the POV. And I LOVED that the first bit was very innocent sounding, but speckled here and there with unabashedly sexual words.

Side note: I do think Fuu got the sweetest part of the deal. Those two beauties screwing you and eachother? Enough to send any lucky girl over the edge. ;)
schedule June 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ah! This was a new concept for me! Or at least, I haven\'t seen it done before. Well written, with a smooth flow and damn, it was hawt. =3

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