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November 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
the only thing i have to say is it is \"overtly horny\" whether you should take that the wrong way or whether its a compliment feel free to pick that\'s just the feeling I get from it keep going, I\'m a little sap that\'s why need that romantic thing atmosphere eheh urs i think belongs in the middle keep up the good work
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October 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'m still on chap 8.Pretty good.I never liked OCs.This is my first.Keep it up!
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August 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AWSOME story !!!! I loved how eb=ven though it was 13 chapters it didn\'t drag on, it kept me wanting more!
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August 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i want more!!!!
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August 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOW you used the word pussy. you really dont see that too often...even in lemons! I loved it!!!! write more!
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August 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
THis great please continue.
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August 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I think it´s...well...it´s the first fic i like with a ...bold (?) tohru...Ijust like her cute and innocent *ieeeeeeeeep*
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July 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
...you stopped in the middle of a chapter?! grr...
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July 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good job on making the chapters longer but I think the reason people are rating low is because you are putting wrong information. Like for example, orgy is group sex consisting of 5 or more people. Be a little bit more descriptive. I don\'t know what else to tell you since I\'m not that good at lemon writing. The one you have rated for me, I\'m writing on a dare.
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July 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ai! Sweetattas...whatever. I know what an \'orgy\' is, ok?! But over here, \'orgy\' is just short for orgasm. \'group orgy\' means lots of pplz, ok?
I would change it, but I\'m feelin a lil lazy right now. Maybe later.
I would change it, but I\'m feelin a lil lazy right now. Maybe later.