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Chapter 24

Wait, what?

WHAT?!

THAT'S IT!? NO MORE? UPDATE SOOOOOOONNN!!!!

Wow, awesome story! You can really read how well thought trough this is... I actually very much Like Verena, she's really cool! Stein I'd rather wash down the drain somewhere (but hey, who wouldn't?), Shu and Brad are both amazingly well done characterwise and Farf really, really gives me the creeps... I can't help it, he always does, but him being so unpredicteble and close to Shu... I can wholly understand Crawforts doubts on the matter. What I did notive, though, is that Brad totally forgot to ask about the reason Shu didn't want to sleep with Far anymore... Did he forget?

This is a charming story, very active in both plot and sex (which is always a good thing!) I'm sorry I missed it until now, but I spent my entire day reading, so hopefully that will make up for it.

I am glad there is an update. Stein's mind disappearing is highly suspicious. I hope Crawford and Schuldig figure out what's happening.

i'm so totally enraptured by this story, i read it all in one go with only a break for dinner! ^_^
u do an AMAZING job with Farfarello -he IS incredibly hard to write for -& yet u've given him LOTS of very believable face-time. The rising & falling tensions of this sex-triangle are awesome as well. ^_~
......oh, & the OC's aren't bad either.... ^_~

i also REALLY love your snarky humor, especially in the dialogue. ^_^
i can't wait for more.

Wheee~ finally! :D

I still wonder how much longer it's going to take Brad to realize his feelings. He's going to be so shocked, huh? *gg*
I absolutely loved the comment about Brad being Schu's safe haven... I bet if Brad hat listened more closely, he'd have liked it, too *g*
And I loved the smex... and the cuddling!!!

And really, those visions are useful, I'm sure Schu would have hated it if they'd have had to stop because of a call of Eszet (I know I would've hated it xD)... still, maybe Brad should've turned the phone back on. Something bad is going to happen, I just know it >< *chews on nails*

:thud: That was incredible hot. I love the idea of Crawford being Schuldig's safe haven. It is amusing how Crawford is still in denial about his true feelings for the redhead. The way Schu snuggled up to him in the end was so cute. I just hope turning the phone off won't be problematic later.

*pets Farf, gives Schu a cookie, and Crawford some "me time" and Nagi a shiny new memory card so he doesn't feel left out*

I loves you. I loves you and your writing.

And yes, my computer survived.

GHAAAAAAAHHHH!!! More please! *gnaws on computer until next chapter*

I sort of want Schuldig to run over to Crawford's room and stay there.