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Yay, a new chapter!

And the prospects for the next one sound good, too :D
How long does Brad plan on keeping deceiving himself? o,O; *whacks him over the head*
And wth is going on with Stein? That sounds more than just suspicious o__o;

Ah, it was a great chapter (I'm sorry I didn't review the last one, I'm so stressed at the moment - actually I shouldn't be reviewing right now but doing something for Uni, yay for procrastinating...), I can't wait for the next one *____*~

*pouts and paws for more*

I am glad Crawford saved Schuldig (Stein is probably seething). I hope they make up in the next chapter. Farf is a tad creepy. I wonder what he is planning.

While I kinda like farf in here, I hope his relationship w/ schul don't become too intimate, cuz I am rooting for crawford and schul all the way. It would also be interesting to see what the price crawford have to pay to keep schul, cuz surely getting him out of trouble wasn't free, right? can't wait for an update.

I feel for Farfarello and his frustration ;). But nice chapter all the same. I'm really curious how this'll play out.

........ *pouts* Cliff hanger.

I wants more.

I'm really starting to feel bad for Farf. (granted, i love him...) And, eeps, poor Schuldig.

Checking back a second time today to see if there was anything new was definitely a good idea.
But... aaaaaaaah you're so mean! The cliffhanger.... x___x;
How is Schu going to react to that?!
What the hell is going to happen to him? ;___; *is worried*
Is there no way for Crawford to keep his telepath there and take care of the "disciplinary measures" himself?!?! (XD~)
When is Crawford going to realize why he wants Schu all to himself?
And what will happen when Schu finds out?!

And... and.... oooookay, I'm going to stop here, but.... I want moooooore ;_; *puppy eyes* New chapters of this story always make my day!!!
I love how they all are written, I even like Nagi when he shows up (and usually I don't really like him at all)! And Crawford... especially Crawford! Everything about him... I almost got scared reading how mad he was but I liked it sooooooooo much!
*sits down to wait for more*

I couldn't help but enjoy the way Schu was pushing Stein's buttons. I hope Crawford can find a way to keep Schuldig there. As incensed as he is with his telepath, we all know he cares.

*waits impatiently*

I just read all 17 chapters in the space of a couple hours, just because I could not stop. I was lured in by the VERY hot sex, and then utterly captivated by *gasp!* an intriguing plot. Imagine that...lemony goodness and genuine thoughtful storytelling in the same fic. Your Crawford is dead-on, from his frustration over his nonfunctioning precognition to his possessiveness of Schu and his denial thereof. Your original characters are distinctive and real. Takatori and his girlfriend are hilarious. And you've written probably the best take on Farfarello I've ever read. The workings of his psychotic mind are detailed and disturbing without being over the top, and this is the first time I've ever seen him portrayed as romantic. It's cute, in a creepy sort of way. I look forward to reading more of this.