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I like this ending much better than what you sent me. Smoother and much more in character. Good job hun.

Nice! Schuldig's awake again and Crawford's "in the mood" ^___^ I'm really enjoying this fic, please update soon! Sorry I can't think of anything else to say right now. I remember some fanfic author writing in her lj that she liked constructive criticism better than "I luv this fic, update plz!!!111" reviews, but how am I supposed to criticize something that I think is perfect?

Another excellent chapter. I'm glad Schu is awake, I've missed him.

Ahh! You have to finish it. This is a majorly evil cliff hanger you have going. I wonder what Farfarello will do in his boredom. And can they stop him in time? Eeek. Please, review soon. n.n; It's a great fic in progress. =3

Yay, nice! I really liked the Crawford pov at the beginning of this chapter (#8). I read the first part of this many months ago, then forgot all about it. Then I kinda stumbled upon it again some days ago, and man, was I glad that there were 7 chapters already. For some reason I always missed the updates. I think it\'s because the summary doesn\'t remind me it\'s this fic, it\'s a little...uh... unspecific, I think. I hope you understand what I mean. Anyway, great fic. Keep writing, please! ^_^

Bravo! This story is great. I can really appreciate the quality of the words and pace that haven\'t been present in a lot of fanfic for this series in the last few months. It seems lately most fics are of no real depth or plot and some PWP even seem to lack a bit to be enjoyable. I won\'t name names, that would be mean. But it is so enjoyable to have something to read now that takes more that a half hour and actually leaves a person thinking about whats going to happen next. I don\'t know where you\'re headed but I look forward to finding out. Keep up the good work. You rock!

This is a great story, I love the way you are handling the characters. Cliffhangers are frustrating, but as long as you come along with a new chapter eventually then they are good way to hold reader interest. It\'s when the writer gets burned out on the story and leaves it hanging off a cliff, along with the readers, forever that I hate.

Ruby, the story is developing very nicely - with a number of lovely little twists. Looking forward to where you\'re taking us with this! Thank you so much!

Wow o wow.more please.

It is completely my bad that I haven\'t left you a review. Humble apologies. But then again, you already know I think this is very good *sneak peak happy dance*. Keep it coming hun. And I love the way you end with cliffies that are simply evil.