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March 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
A+++ best aff ever i loved it its like i was acutely there, please inform me when the next chapter is out
thanks bunches
PH <3 sakaki-san
thanks bunches
PH <3 sakaki-san
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August 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
HOT HOT HOT HOT HOT HOT HOT HOT HOT HOT HOT!
WELL WRITEN!
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July 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love this story! It is definately hot! I'm a fan of Sakaki, and this is one story that I LOVE! well writen!
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July 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wahey, this is getting hot! please update soon, I can't wait for the rest of this yummy story! Well writen!
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January 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG that was funny loved the end note thingy will definitely go and read some more right now lol
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January 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
more more MORE please
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January 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yes! Lemon, lemon, lemon! This is the pair I've been waiting for all my life!
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January 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
<___<; It has the potential to go places it just bothers me some that Sakaki is horribly OOC.
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December 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
verry good for what's up now. please add more.
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November 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice so far, and we always knew of Kaorin\'s obsession, but here\'s what we missed...
Just when/why/how exactly did Sakaki develop her feelings? It\'s like you\'re setting this up to be some kind of dream/nightmare for Kaorin that she will regretfully wake up from, because Sakaki was no where near that aggressive, imo, unless something extremely kawaii caught her attention. If you can give us some introspection into when she first noticed Karoin and actually began to develop feelings for her, I think you could make this better, since the Sakaki most of us know is almost clueless as to Kaorin\'s crush.
You can\'t just GIVE Kaorin what she\'s been pining for, or you might as well just give Kimura-sensei what he wants as well, ne?
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Just when/why/how exactly did Sakaki develop her feelings? It\'s like you\'re setting this up to be some kind of dream/nightmare for Kaorin that she will regretfully wake up from, because Sakaki was no where near that aggressive, imo, unless something extremely kawaii caught her attention. If you can give us some introspection into when she first noticed Karoin and actually began to develop feelings for her, I think you could make this better, since the Sakaki most of us know is almost clueless as to Kaorin\'s crush.
You can\'t just GIVE Kaorin what she\'s been pining for, or you might as well just give Kimura-sensei what he wants as well, ne?
W.