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October 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
More please.
With love; Imasuky Lomae
With love; Imasuky Lomae
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September 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
he-he-hee-hee-he-he! very good. i enjoyed it, i don\'t see many Edward Wong Hau.... stories, and its refreshing to see a good one. he-hee. Keep on reading
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September 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
He-he-hee-hee-he-hee-hee. Sorry, I mean writing, not reading. Hee-he-hee-he-he. Thats what happens when your mind is somewhere else
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August 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I liked it, I wish you would make a sequel, it was definatly well written, but short if anything, keep up the good work ;)
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July 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wasnt really unpleasing... just different and kinda wierd...
but good job just the same, mate!
but good job just the same, mate!
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July 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I ... er ... um .... It\'s well-written & flows well. I can see Ed trying this. But I think Jet would try quite a bit harder to stop her. ... Can see him picking her up by the shoulders and setting her on the floor; saying Sit. Stay.
Maybe if he was drunk or half asleep? Hm. Kicks at plot bunny. Uh-huh No way am I writing this one ....
Maybe if he was drunk or half asleep? Hm. Kicks at plot bunny. Uh-huh No way am I writing this one ....
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July 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Aww, that was SO sweet! ^^ In a sick, twisted way, I suppose, hehe. I agree with you, though, I really DO like the ending...funny with the whole Spike/Faye bits, too. Can\'t get enough of those two! =-P
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July 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Interesting... I like Jet\'s feelings you put in there at the beginning and end. They make a nice introduction and conclusion.
My person favorite part was Spike\'s first line. It was hilarious to me.
Very nice fic.
My person favorite part was Spike\'s first line. It was hilarious to me.
Very nice fic.