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Woo~ I can hardly wait for the next chapter to read~!!

~Midnight

another lovely chapter! please update again soon! poor shu!!

wow! i really really really like this story! yay! please continue and update it again real soon! bravo!!!!!

As a sufferer of depression, and someone who was put on medication, I am very impressed with the way you described Shuichi\'s descent through depression, and his resentment against taking medication. I too, had the same problem, although I never spit them out in the trash can. Although I would like to point out one thing in that scene: most depression medication (I don\'t know for certain with Zoloft), come in gel capsules, which dissolve once they come in contact with saliva. So if Shuichi had hid the Zoloft under his tongue to keep Yuki from finding out he hadn\'t taken it, it would have dissolved and left the nastiest taste in his mouth.

An excellent read, I really do enjoy this story. Please continue your hard work.

Another lovely chapter, my dear~ Few errors but you warned us.

Say, if you need a beta I\'ll do it. I\'ll beta for you. All you had to do was ask~ ^__~

My email is soujirofanatic@hotmail.com

~Midnight

Wow... Shu certinly was a wreck. Yeah I\'m really liking this. (And I\'m a girl, by the way ^_~)

Umm.. hmm... Let me see... Trying to think of some constructive critisiim... In one of the paragraphs, you have the dictor and Eiri talking in the same paragraph... That\'s a no-no sweetie~ ^_~ Just make a new paragraph where Eiri starts talking and your fine~

I\'m wating for the next chapter~!!!

~Midnight

this is quite nice, but has actually been done b4 by damphir...similarly..nicely written tho...update soon

Yay~ Another chapter~ I was so happy! Oh please update this soon! Please please!! This is gonna be so good!

~Midnight

I like it. ^_^. Angsty, in a way. I can\'t wait for you to post the next chapter, so do it soon, k? ^_^.

Is this the end? O_o I hope not because now you have a great start. I loved how this chapter was written. Please don\'t be the end!!

~Midnight