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To be honest, I was starting to wonder if you'd ever continue this.

Well, at long last, Beryl and Metallia are in "bed" together. And I think I know what some of the family's fates are doomed to be now. Let the downhill slide continue. Laters!

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

I just hope that this is a Endy/Sere pairing fic and NOT a Beryl? endy fic! That is so gross! Having Endy lip locked to Beryl! You are cruel! Dont you like Serenity?

Ahhh! She is pregnant! Nasty! It is actually her fault but I dont like her! Next chapter please!

chap 15, wow, talk about love at first site LOL, Serena didn\'t even speak! and yeah i can see how all of this would weigh VERY heavily on Dairen mind as being his fault...I kinda agree but it just all kind of got out of control. You have a very gripping story here, A lot of emotion but what (I) really like about it is that it\'s mostly realistic. The way the fathers act, the way the teens act, even all the plotting, with royality it happens has happened in the kind of system the story takes place in.

And happy naive Serena, knowing nothing of greed, backstabbing and pure evil....ah very good by showing her in this light in this time it makes it believable in how she got the kind of personality she had when she was sailor moon!

I enjoyed. Happy writing! side note I actually wrote some myself this weekend! Yay

Jumel is SO gonna be her first victim, maybe second after her folks. Next time - When Beryl Met Metallia! And hopefully when P. Serenity met Endymion! Hope the wait isn\'t too long! Laters!

And of course now, everything goes kaboomskie! And in regards to \"the one that got away\", would that be Metallia, Neherenia, or the Ice Queen from the S Movie? My money\'s going on either A or C, really. And were those Senshi the ones we know and love, or their mothers? Well, look forward to the next one and the long awaited introduction to P. Serenity! Laters!

And, yes, hindsight is truly 20-20. A problem my family has become all too familiar with over time for many, many reasons...

chap 14 is excellent!!! ah a look at the soldiers and Queen Serenity

and dumb humans always so greedy and jealous! Blah

And here would be a relatively good place to insert the Neherenia encounter - she comes storming, possibly slaying a few Pagasi who get in her way, and then, upon actually discovering the GC\'s location, attempts to seduce Helios into forking it over, or at least joining her side in her \"take over the universe\" plans. Helios tells her to go screw herself, she attacks him, he defends, then Q. Srenity arrives, and seals her in mirror, and shoots her to Dead Moon which is sent flying away on a roughly thousand or so year orbit(plus or minus a few decades...) But not before Neherenia throws a curse on P. Serenity(Like she did in the Manga?). You\'re call of course, it\'ll just be nice to finally get the Moon Kingdom invlolved here! Laters!