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person deep serenity
schedule August 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
chap 13-poor elios it was so sad how the adult peg\'s didn\'t understand his or his sister\'s behavior and therefore didn\'t really try to make it easier for the children in my opinion. No one knew how to deal with surface raised kids.

Wow it must have had a really tough 1st year and was wonderful seeing more about his growing up in this chap. Love the look into their society!

great job
person Scorpinac
schedule August 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Aah, sweet misery! All we need now is a psycho bitch with a sledgehammer and a yen for hobbling men. Okay then, next time the Moon Kingdom\'s just GOT to come into the picture! I don\'t think you can hold it off any longer, oh madam procastinator! I look forward to seeing Endymion\'s true first meeting with Princess Serenity. Laters!
person deep serenity
schedule August 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ahhhhhhhh I\'d almost forgot about Zo younger brother...almost LOL. That is interesting!

and Beryl jealous as always, and attention hungry.

Both bothers were to be kings.....hmmmm

and poor Darien LOL, trapped into a marriage by convention such a young boy really LOL and you would think he would figure it out with Zo and Beryl....but then again those two are probably such an unlikely hook up in anyones mind!

Good job, looking forward to the next
person Scorpinac
schedule August 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ooh, now that was a close one! And yet, knowing their imminent fate, I wasn\'t surprised someone made it in the proverbial nick of time. And of course, the next step now is off to the Moon, and the true beginning of Beryl\'s madness! And perhaps Beryl finding and joining forces with Metallia! Well, looking forward to it either way. Laters!
person deep serenity
schedule August 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
chap 11-LMAO, that was funny and good for the queen being nice! and Darien....is so dense! Maybe this is why he\'s more serious in his next life cause he\'s stupid and willy nilly in this one. LOL well this is really good and can\'t wait to read the next tale.

Poor Zo, he has a lot of baggage
person deep serenity
schedule August 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
chap 9-well I don\'t blame Nisha, Beryl was cleary trying to steal the show and make it obvious to everyone the Darien was hers,

that was a good chap, and shows how desperate for Dariens attention Beryl was

on to read next chap
person deep serenity
schedule August 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
chap 10-Excellent! had me rolling! love the \"shady boat\" of fun!

Slightly confused with why she slapped Zo though

and they are stupid to get caught! LOL, good job on how everyone tried to cover for them LOL
person Scorpinac
schedule August 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Okay, NOW Terrance has been conceived! Can\'t wait to see how they keep Fred and Lyd from killing him, though! ROFL. This is gonna be fun, and I bet within another chapter or two it\'s off to the Moon...and Princess Serenity! Laters!
person Scorpinac
schedule July 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
And next time, a trip to the Moon, possibly? And perhaps the fateful meeting of Hell\'s bitches? Well, laters!
person Scorpinac
schedule July 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh, why do I suspect something really unpleasant in Nisha\'s future? But then, that sort of goes without saying, doesn\'t it? And I\'m guessing that during their little half-drunken beach fun, Prince Terrance hath been conceived? And next chapter, \"When Beryl Met Metallia\", right? Laters!

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