rate_review Reviews

lOVED chapter 2, it is a credit to you as a writer that I could easily follow the story

When I writer can make Original char and bring them to life, that is something to be proud of

I keep telling people on fanfic sites that it\'s not what you write but how, as long as a story is well written and clear and interesting I will read it, very very good job, you got me interested in the generals(something no other stories has done) in the years I\'ve been reading and writing fan fics

Interesting beginning. I imagine next time we\'ll pop briefly to the Moon Kingdom and see Serenity Jr/II as a little imp? Hmm, two miscarriages, I\'d be paranoid of getting pregnant again, too, and I\'m a guy! Well, bring us the next chunk at your will. Laters!

Oh, and I liked the little poem up front, too, very well done.

Ahhhh, said and I can see it will be tragic too. Darien so loved when very young then went on to be with out family and alone....I loved all the background info, it is a view into Darien heritage(that is rarely showed) in any stories, I like it and it will help to see how and why his personality was shaped and why he thinks the way he does

I can\'t wait for next chap, very good job, this story is so emotional already