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for Bete Noir

by Macx

person Ita-chan
schedule July 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Waaahhhh,..Pooooorrr Byako-chan,..*sob,sob*
Did Rikugo really do all those nasty things to poor Byako-chan?? *sniffles*
Arrrghhh i couldn\'t imagine stoic calm Rikugo doing all that, *grimace* just makes me wana puke,..*gag*


p/s: BTW, another kickass chapter Macx-sama,*big-grins* Keep up the good work wokey-dokey?? And continue soon!!\\/^_~\\/
person Ellynh
schedule July 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i´m so curious what it was that broke him o_O
The writing is great, as well as all the characterisations^^
person Nancy
schedule July 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
As allways, this new story sounds great!
person RavenWings
schedule July 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
...Uh oh. UhohuhohuhohUHOH! ...Damn, that\'s about all I can think of for comments on this chapter. Meep! Poor Byakko... And I can\'t help but wonder, who\'s the target? Touda? Since Touda and Tsuzuki are linked... and all that... ohhh, this is gonna be *bad*...
person Lathir
schedule July 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Owww...that sounds pretty bad oO
But its great to see some Byakko-Action again, hope youll update it fast...o_O

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