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August 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
....i just thought of something...what\'s Goku gonna say to Hakkai? Or do to Hakkai??...uh-oh... more please ^_~
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August 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god! You are an evil, wicked person! Leave us hanging like that. Seriously, I love your work and can\'t wait to see the next chapter! You\'ve got a real way with creating images with your words and you have managed to keep the characters true to form and have captured my attention (not like that\'s a real important thing, i am only one person). I\'m looking forward to the next chapter.
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August 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is just the greatest story
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August 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Hakkai\'s so messed up, I wonder what Sanzo will do. What Goku will do. Is he gonna break too?
I hope you continue soon, I want to know, I crave for more. Your writing style is very nice, it\'s different from what I\'ve read before - and I\'ve read quite a lot. I could feel the rain outside, feel Hakkai\'s rage. Changing POVs made a nice effect.
I hope you continue soon, I want to know, I crave for more. Your writing style is very nice, it\'s different from what I\'ve read before - and I\'ve read quite a lot. I could feel the rain outside, feel Hakkai\'s rage. Changing POVs made a nice effect.
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July 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOW! Amazing! But it was a bit hard to understand who was saying/thinking what towards the ends. Still, bravo! I can\'t wait for more!
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July 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story. Hope to see it continued.
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July 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Duude. Hakkai\'s got *issues* don\'t he. Liked! Ooo, the relationship btw Sanzo and Goku is PERFECT! And Hakkai\'s reaction is starteling and brilliant!
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July 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Again I must say wow! Your cliffhangers never fail to make me crawl back for more. It\'s just too good, too dark and so very captivating. I eagerly await the next chapter!
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July 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YAY! Cant wait for the next one! You update fast!
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July 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is pretty interesting. I don\'t really like Sanzo/Goku (I\'m all about Hakkai/(Sanzo, Goyjo) but this is good. I can\'t quite reconcile Hakkai\'s behavior towards the situation, though. After all, he was sleeping with his sister, so Idon\'t think he would judge as harshly as you\'ve written it. But if you\'ve come up with something that will make it seem more reasonalbe to me, I\'ll like it even more. Regardless of how thing turn out, I\'m enjoying the original plot and the characterizations.