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October 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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December 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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August 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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July 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like this tale. Some suggestions, if you\'d like to take them into consideration. 1) Motoki is serving customers, not costumers. 2) I don\'t think a mother would tell a stranger, I\'m alone with my daughter. Though Mamoru is nice, still, Ikoku shouldn\'t have told him about her daughter. Unless of course she was trying to hook them up?
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July 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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July 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
NICE writing! I think your set up(for the stories) is a good one, but can be combined into one story with different names for each chapter
also, I was expecting some interaction with Serena and Darien...but you cut it off before that could happen. WHile I personally like Serena\'s mother, I still wanted more Serena and Darien
also, I was expecting some interaction with Serena and Darien...but you cut it off before that could happen. WHile I personally like Serena\'s mother, I still wanted more Serena and Darien