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by veesempai

person Ping
schedule January 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I can't really think of any other OP fic like this... Firstly, Luffy x Zoro= Love. It was spot-on in characterisation, it was sexy, and so incredibly sweet (to balance the naughtiness XD). It was touching and endearing without being forced or overly mushy. I am afraid I have to declair this to be my favorite OP fanfic I've ever had the pleasure of reading.
person Volett
schedule January 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I have so much love for this story, it's the best ZoLu story I've come across yet (though I always search for more, it's exceptionally difficult to find good One Piece fanfiction, erlack).
I liked how tender the fic was, but you still had funny spots in all the appropriate places. The fic has a very natural feel to it.
Anyway, if you don't mind I intend to add this to my rec list on my next update.
person TheDarknessVoid
schedule August 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Occasionaly, and I mean very occasionaly, you find a fic on this site that is IC, emotive and well-written. This fic is most definitely one of those rarities. Very well done.
person Ludra_Jenova
schedule November 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YAY!!!! I LOVE THE FIC!!!!! this is the first time I\'d read a Luffy/Zoro with Luffy as a Seme!!!! GOD STILL LOVE ME ToT...I really love that couple in that way only, I know is weird and difficult to find fic with this couple in that way, almost all are Zoro/Luffy...and I don\'t like in that way T^T...that why I ADORE YOU FIC!!!!, I\'m really happy because you made my day great!!! I\'M SO HAPPY NOW!!!! YAY!!!! XDDDDDDD, sorry the emotion hehehehehe XP...anyway I love you fic (I\'ll never tired of say it) and I hope you\'ll do more with this pairing in that way, Zoro as an Uke is more cute than the way he is now ♥¬♥

L.M.N
Ludra Maco Naít
person Ludra_Jenova
schedule November 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YAY!!!! I LOVE THE FIC!!!!! this is the first time I\'d read a Luffy/Zoro with Luffy as a Seme!!!! GOD STILL LOVE ME ToT...I really love that couple in that way only, I know is weird and difficult to find fic with this couple in that way, almost all are Zoro/Luffy...and I don\'t like in that way T^T...that why I ADORE YOU FIC!!!!, I\'m really happy because you made my day great!!! I\'M SO HAPPY NOW!!!! YAY!!!! XDDDDDDD, sorry the emotion hehehehehe XP...anyway I love you fic (I\'ll never tired of say it) and I hope you\'ll do more with this pairing in that way, Zoro as an Uke is more cute than the way he is now ♥¬♥
person KR
schedule November 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
...I didn\'t review to this already? But why not?! I freaking love this story. I mean, I\'ve read it at least three times. It\'s just so perfect! It\'s sweet and beautiful and lemony and well written. I just love it! ^_^ And it\'s so different! I hope you\'ll write more like it!
So, \'til then!
-KR
person Anon
schedule November 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is absolutely marvolous. Truly wonderful. I love it so much that I go back and reread it almost one a week. You\'re great. Write more.
person bean
schedule September 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I loved this so freaking much! Awesome writer, yes you are.
person cassi
schedule August 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
woot!!! that gave me shivers... so that means it was good!!! i liked how it was long and detailed- nobody does that anymore. keep writing zoro x luffy stuff!! i dont see much of it, its always lime. i favor lemon ;)
person Terri-Lee
schedule August 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I always love a good Luffy/Zoro story, and this is one of the best I\'ve read in a long time. You did a great job.

Terri

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