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Horray! You know, as a dyslexic you\'re doing really good at this story. ::nods alot:: I\'ve been busy with school things so if you updated this awhile ago, sorry bout not reviewing earlier. ^^;I\'d love to hear about England! I\'ve always wanted to go there myself. See I even made sure my email was in this review!! I really really cant wait for the next update! =D

oh, how me lovey sooo much.... this is actually the first KenFar fic that I \'ve ever read.... but its really VERY good.

I think this may become one of my favorite couples.... anyway.... it was really good....

interesting i thought that there wasn\'t anyone else with dyslexia who liked farf. well your not alone in having dyslexia i deal with it as well. oh more please. this is turning out to be a great story. please continue. leaves cookie and pocky for authoress.

EEK! Such a great story so far.C=
But what is mean... is the CLIFF HANGER in the preview~!!! XC
I cant wait for the next farfie filled chappy!

So where in England did you go? Have fun? =]

It\'s nice to find a fic with this interesting and very rare pairing. Personally I still prefer Schuldig/Farfarello but I like my Berserker any and every way.
It\'s nice that you pointed out that you\'re dyslexic, it makes us slightly more understanding towards your work, but may I suggest that you still get a good beta to look through your works as it is quite messy at points? For example your spelling is more than random and your grammatical mistakes, like the abuse of irregular verbs and odd use of certain phrases, make it seem like English isn\'t your first language of use.
Also the story itself could do with a bit more build up since the events unfolding such as they are give the story flow a very inconsistent feel and the constant change in POVs interrupt it even further. I hope you don\'t think I\'m being too harsh on you and you\'ll accept this as constructive criticism. It\'d be sad if I depressed you so much that you\'d abandon this lovely little story.

Yay you updated I really liked this story and was worried you\'d given up on it. My sisters\' dyslexic I know it can be really hard, but I never would have thought you were, you write really well and every makes one or two spelling mistakes that they never catch on thier own. I didn\'t notice any really bad grammer this time so great job and I can\'t wait untill you update again:)!!!!!

You must continue!!! This is good so far! ^_^
I want to see how you get Farf and Ken together. n_n
much luff and stuff.

this is really good. the spelling is pretty good. please continue . you don\'t find many ken/farf farf/ken fics on the net that don\'t involve one or both of them dying right away. it\'s nice to find one that has a good plot. i\'ll give you a batch of cookies if you continue.

I really like your story so far Ken/Far,Far/Ken are my fav WK paring and I really like your characterization so far.But watch out for spelling and grammer mistakes.You seem to make the same ones constantly so you might want to have someone else read through before you post.Not that it was that bad I\'ve read much worse just watch out for \"with\"you spell it as \"whit\" and \"all\" has two l\'s.please don\'t be discouraged \'cause I really do like your story so far and can\'t spell either so just saying you should watch out for it.Other than keep up the good work and update soon:)!!!!