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I always wondered what Jin thought too. Interesting and I think he should stare at Mugen's ass a lot , cause it is cute.

Oh, that was great! I loved Jin\'s thoughts on frying up Mugen, and that last line was great! You kept Jin in character the whole way through. Thank you for the very good read.

Highly amusing! very deep at the same time too, i think you got Jin\'s character down well though some might say hes a bit OOC, id say, its his internal thoughts, not his external behavior, and you did a good job interpreting him. Will you be continuing at all? please say yes. i love the pov and your writing, and im dying for a decent jin/mugen/fuu!

I truly enjoy your pieces! You seem to be able to cover every permutation of this trio and keep them in character each time. I especially like the \"Cinnamon and Jasmine\" series and can\'t wait to see more!

It wasn\'t choppy! It was wonderful!


Very good insight! I look for you specifically now when I come to this category! You\'re the most prolific SC writer ever! Three Cheers for FullMetal!