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October 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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September 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
quote: \"Please review, on content..
Non on spelling I know I suck at that.
I dont need spell check. Im all natural!\"
Spelling and grammer are NOT optional, they are RULES!! If you want to win the repect of the fandom community, then you must use correct grammer and spelling. So take a composition class and brush up on that. That said, content you have is novel. A betrayal fic where Mamoru/Darien is the victum. A great change from all the Usagigetscheatedonandgoestoamerica type lines.
Non on spelling I know I suck at that.
I dont need spell check. Im all natural!\"
Spelling and grammer are NOT optional, they are RULES!! If you want to win the repect of the fandom community, then you must use correct grammer and spelling. So take a composition class and brush up on that. That said, content you have is novel. A betrayal fic where Mamoru/Darien is the victum. A great change from all the Usagigetscheatedonandgoestoamerica type lines.
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August 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hehe! I think Darien should kill off the traitors! Its his planet and he is the king. How dare they take that away from them! So does Darien get to use his golden crystal??
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August 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Really good story so far. I am really enjoying it. This is a little different from what other authors write, but I think that that\'s why I like it so much. Please update... I want to find out what is going to happen next.