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October 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Nice update but im kinda confused at some parts but the story=good lemon=average I have reviewd i have reviewed i have reviewd!!!!!
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October 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Nice update but im kinda confused at some parts but the story=good lemon=average I have reviewd i have reviewed i have reviewd!!!!!
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February 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Nice story but cant wait for more and OOOOO KEITARO GETS SPECIAL TREATMENT OF PITY!!!! and hell get angry as fuckn hell and shit and more problems arrive and the bloody sailor senshi KICK DER ASS MAN!!!! and hopefully things go good for Keitaro............. in the future but as of now ANGST ANGST ANGST!!!!
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February 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Please don't let him go off on Shinobu ok. She's the only to actually HELP him with chorse and stuff and help him feel better when ever he was down. She doesn't deserve for him to go off on her. PLEASE. In fact maybe you can have him acutally thank her for her help....Just a thought. At the very least don't let him go off on Shinobu. please.
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February 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
sorry wrong fanfic.
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January 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
very interesting, the idea is excellent and i like he way you've used "existing" fantasy creatures, aswell as the "not Quite" alliance between enemies although i do hope that the hinata girls are featured a lot more than the sailor moon girls (especially when it involves keitaro's demon needing its sustenence.
all in all please continue this fic
all in all please continue this fic
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September 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ya litterally \"don\'t fuck with me\" HAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!! Damn thisis good, really why is it that almost every who has these problems tries to bottle them up? Desires ARE emotions, so, same thing, right? They eventually explode out of control, not Keitaro\'s fault, not fully at least. he\'s just to fucking innocent to understand that. however in such a situation... his innocence must be shattered.
Quote: \"The innocent \'never\' live long enough to save themselves\"
By: I.G. Senkel
~Ian
Quote: \"The innocent \'never\' live long enough to save themselves\"
By: I.G. Senkel
~Ian
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August 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
An interesting if not slightlly chaotic third chapter. Rather impressive.
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August 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yo. great fic lol. i see you read Tithe lol. it a good book. cant wait for the next update. thank you for writing. lol ^_^
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August 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE YOU! (As a friend) This story is so kewl! Plz, update!
\"Dance til your legs are covered in blood.\"-Immortal Rain
\"Dance til your legs are covered in blood.\"-Immortal Rain