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Ooookaaaay....[takes deep breath] I AM SO SICK AND TIRED OF SAILOR MOON APPEARING IN LOVE HINA FANFICS!!!! WHY DO PEOPLE KEEP DOING THIS???!!! No seriously, why is it that this keeps popping up? I may not like crossovers very much, but I dont mind them much. But when people keep slapping Sailor Moon in everywhere, it just annoys the heck out of me.

\"But those Sailor girls are hot...\"

I laugh at this. You\'ve got six hot/cute Hinata girls to work with. Actually, four since I don\'t think Kitsune or Motoko\'s hot in any way. Make Keitaro a demon and rape all of them for all I care, but you don\'t need to slap the Sailor Senshi into this. If you want to make a fanfic with Sailor Moon, cut out Keitaro and the other girls, slap in the same demon and a few characters he knows and then you can do the same exact fanfic in the Sailor Moon section. Now that that\'s been squared away...

Minus the Sailor Moon crap, your fic was good. Doing it in the POV of the demon is a good idea, and you did it fairly well.

you\'re a very good writer. One of few writers i know that can pull off this sort of thing. though i don\'t like the rape much. your story has potential. good luck

very good story. other than the whole keitaro, seta when he was 14 thingy, good story...

Good fic, keep it up as i want to see what happens now.

Best of luck

Nexus51

sounds pretty good so far. please write more

wow intresting start I hope you update quickly I looking forward to it