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July 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey, when you ended \'Night\'s addiction\' I thought it would take a long time before you would write a sequel, if you already were going to do it. So guess how surprised I was when I saw that you had posted the first chapter of the sequal!
Well to begin with, I just LOVE your idea to let Ran\'s old lover return to the scene. You can do a whole lot with that, but for the moment we will just have to wait and see which way you\'ll be heading.
The beginning of the chapter where we have the description about Ran\'s old lover who\'se watching over the land, is very beautiful. I\'d say that it\'s almost something like how a movie could start. You described it so well that I was able to imagine it without a problem and that I was immediately swept away in the story.
When you ended \'Night\'s addiction\' I wondered how Ken would react to Ran having changed him into a vampire. I found it nice from you that you answered the question in this chapter. And I have to say that it really is true love that our Ken feels for Ran since he hasn\'t only forgivin the cheating but also that Ran changed him in a moment of weakness.
Shion\'s speech to Ken was wonderfull! It held so much wisdom and showed very good that Shion has been around many centuries and has gathered a lot of wisdom during that time. While I didn\'t love the Shion from the previous story (I found him a bastered there) I love this one and I hope he\'ll be showing up a lot in the story.
And how much has changed since the previous story. In \'Night\'s addiction\' it was Ken who was afraid all the time that Ran would leave him and now the roles are reversed. We have a very angsty Ran who\'se scared to death to lose his lover. It just shows how much stronger Ken has become and when Ran\'s ex-lover shows up, Ken won\'t go down without a fight and even if he would lose Ran, I think he would go to the end of the world to win him back if that is what it would take. (Let us just hope that Ken just doesn\'t get killed by Ran\'s ex-lover)
The scene where Ken repeatedly hits his head on the nightstand made me laugh a bit and I don\'t know who I have to feel the most sorry for, Ken or the poor nightstsand, LOL!
So Ran has also a dark past, NICE!!! Lust can be a very powerfull emotion and I wonder how much hold Ran\'s ex-lover will still have over Ran because of this power. (Ran has already the feeling that some one is calling him and sees his ex-lover, so ...) I just can\'t wait to read whats going to happen further!!
By the way, how many time has past since Ken has become a vampire?
Kisses and hugges
Gillie
Well to begin with, I just LOVE your idea to let Ran\'s old lover return to the scene. You can do a whole lot with that, but for the moment we will just have to wait and see which way you\'ll be heading.
The beginning of the chapter where we have the description about Ran\'s old lover who\'se watching over the land, is very beautiful. I\'d say that it\'s almost something like how a movie could start. You described it so well that I was able to imagine it without a problem and that I was immediately swept away in the story.
When you ended \'Night\'s addiction\' I wondered how Ken would react to Ran having changed him into a vampire. I found it nice from you that you answered the question in this chapter. And I have to say that it really is true love that our Ken feels for Ran since he hasn\'t only forgivin the cheating but also that Ran changed him in a moment of weakness.
Shion\'s speech to Ken was wonderfull! It held so much wisdom and showed very good that Shion has been around many centuries and has gathered a lot of wisdom during that time. While I didn\'t love the Shion from the previous story (I found him a bastered there) I love this one and I hope he\'ll be showing up a lot in the story.
And how much has changed since the previous story. In \'Night\'s addiction\' it was Ken who was afraid all the time that Ran would leave him and now the roles are reversed. We have a very angsty Ran who\'se scared to death to lose his lover. It just shows how much stronger Ken has become and when Ran\'s ex-lover shows up, Ken won\'t go down without a fight and even if he would lose Ran, I think he would go to the end of the world to win him back if that is what it would take. (Let us just hope that Ken just doesn\'t get killed by Ran\'s ex-lover)
The scene where Ken repeatedly hits his head on the nightstand made me laugh a bit and I don\'t know who I have to feel the most sorry for, Ken or the poor nightstsand, LOL!
So Ran has also a dark past, NICE!!! Lust can be a very powerfull emotion and I wonder how much hold Ran\'s ex-lover will still have over Ran because of this power. (Ran has already the feeling that some one is calling him and sees his ex-lover, so ...) I just can\'t wait to read whats going to happen further!!
By the way, how many time has past since Ken has become a vampire?
Kisses and hugges
Gillie
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July 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Cool a sequel. I bet I\'ll enjoy this as much as the last story. Ken is such an easy character to get obsessed with. Ran better watch it!