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December 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow!This totally impressed my fanfic senses!Love the yaoi with Suguru*and I'm pretty much used to incest from FMA* and Suguru is my love...Ah,I love to torture my fav characters...Great fanfic,I would LOVE to read the rest!Oooh...Who's the byker ^_~
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July 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
POOR FUJISAKI! I can't believe he tries to hide it so much. And nobody even notices that anything is wrong with him. Please continue I love this story so much!
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August 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that story killed me!
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August 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is a really dark fic, i\'m eager to see how its all going to end. I do hope suguru\'s \"knight in shining armour\" shows up, it\'s so sad it makes me want to cry *sniff*
please post your next chapter soon
*huggies and smoochies*
please post your next chapter soon
*huggies and smoochies*
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August 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love xthis fic! Update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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July 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I fucken love you fic! Who\'s the guy on the bike?
~Su-chan
~Su-chan
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July 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Poor Suguru. Bad things are happening to him and he just tries to act as if he can handle it. I\'m kinda surprised that no one really notices all the bruises and marks. But then again, Suguru probably learned how to cover everything up behind a veil of lies, fake smiles and cheap make-up.
But great start, good idea and this story has a lot of potential. Keep up the good work and I look forward to reading more.
But great start, good idea and this story has a lot of potential. Keep up the good work and I look forward to reading more.
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July 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love it! Please continue!
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July 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ok, don\'t take this personally but...
your story is full of holes and it moves too fast. i suggest you get a beta as well there were quite a few errors.
i hope this doesn\'t discourage you from wrtiting, it shouldn\'t. ^^
but other than that the plot is.. original.
your story is full of holes and it moves too fast. i suggest you get a beta as well there were quite a few errors.
i hope this doesn\'t discourage you from wrtiting, it shouldn\'t. ^^
but other than that the plot is.. original.